Its decent. Just be prepared for a lot of filler chapters. As in entire chapters of people on forums freaking out and repeating what just happened in the chapter before.
I read up to chapter 50 (the paywall) and it's really good so far I really want to read more but cannot justify spending that type of money on webnovel. so I guess I'm dropping here. I recommend this if you have the 20 something dollars to buy the rest of it.
The author has quite the imagination and thus, can creates a lot of different plots, settings and characters. Each of her stories reflect a will to make bew universes to explore.
Dialogues could be better, but she already know how to make characters interract efficiently with each other.
However, chapters deserve to be more lengthy, as numerous actions/events are barely mentioned and never sought upon in detail. Other mistakes are mostly English languages ones, so if you see some, leave a comment for the author to improve!
I love this story! I really recommend it! And I hope the author has time to finish the story!
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pretty average, not bad, not too good, just alright for a quick read. still a new book so I guess it could get better with enough time and more chapters
h. h. u . h
This story has a lot of cliches. The mc who is constantly and incessantly bullied, and treated like POW in a vietnamese camp. The Mc who is shunned by everyone, even at some point including his parents. Potential female love interest, wielding Ice Powers. Cute little sister. Stupid young masters. As of chapter 151 Mc has not gotten revenge on the people who bullied and tortured him, the only thing close was simply punching someone inconsequential character in the face to prove that he had awakened power. I wouldn't say the novel is too bad, I only read until 151 because I thought his power was interesting and I also enjoyed the multiple power systems present throughout the world. I wouldn't say I was bored, it certainly kept me occupied and entertained for a bit, but it failed to draw me in, in any meaningful way. So sadly chapter 151 is where I drop, I think people should give it a go it might draw them in, but now me.
The usual facev- slapping chinese novel. So annoying.
The only and setting are amazing.Also,the character definition is trilling and addicting.But am so sad that it's a short novel??
I’v been waiting a long time for a fan fiction like this. I hope you never drop this story. I hope this novel goes on for at least 2000 chapters.
The writing could use some improvements, but overall I like the characters. I'm writing this on a school chromebook and I like this way more than anything I'm given to read at school and that means a lot because those books are written by people who write for a job.
I really like the story and the idea behind it especially the dragon elements and the proficiency panel that it's only job is to show you your status levels and proficiency value.