eh, it was good, but then the cliche hits. mc saves a little demon girl and helps her cultivate. couldn't be bothered to know what happens after. If ur into these kinds of stories, then go on ahead.
Hello quick question author. Is it another harem nonsense? I don't read harems( don't care if it is small or whatever. But dating different girls during his lifetime is OK as long as he is monogamous during each relationship. Not some cheating pig) , I would rather know upfront to avoid wasting my time.Thanks.
Good story but I doubt we will see the system before the 40 chapters are done and I think the world background needs to be more detailed but other then that pretty good
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Amazing starts that keeps the readers intrigued and excited about happens next. The world background is amazing, very descriptive and everything I look for in a novel. Keep up the good writing, author. ?
very racist book. calling black children ugly and making fun of them. I do not like racism Especially those targeting children ...............
Really Intresting . i hope will continue to update, I will put my power stone here...
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heyo crazy cronie here,
review on 01/09/2021 @chap 211
(released chap till date: 219)
review divided in:
Short review
Long review with ratings
CC rants.
Conclusion
SHORT REVIEW:
A slow paced SOLish where mc accepts disciples with some action & comedy.
LONG REVIEW:
writing: 9/10
Lil typo mistakes but not to the point where it hinders your reading experience... at least I didn't have any prob.
update: 10+2/10
Yeah, deserves more than the max rating... For me 7 ch/week is must for full rating for any original novels and this one releases more than 7
plot: 7/10
^ Don't get me wrong for the low ratings... There is nothing wrong with the story... The world is being slowly introduced to us which is something I really enjoy
^ the story is well connected and till now there is no plothole (nothing caught my eyes atleast.)
^ But the low rating of this section is because author-chan it seems you forgot the title~
I mean *spoiler*
it has been almost 150 chaps he din get any Disciple.
*spoiler end*
^ the system hasn't been really explained... Tho it might be done in the future.. for now i dont have any idea
I mean till now I thought it's only related to disciples but suddenly we get different side missions *spoiler*
about finding the core of the secret realm and then a survival quest.
*spoiler end* ...
characters: 8.5/10
Nothing bad... Most characters have their own quirk, but still characters could have been given a little more depth. Till now tho it's good.
pacing: 9/10
^ This is a slow paced novel. And it's really enjoyable reading this...
^ -1 maybe because i feel a little increase in pace would do good? Just my opinion
dialogues: 9.5/10
Author did a good job here. People conversing here is one of the things most likeable about this novel.
entertainment: 9/10
Welp this is a biased rating since it totally depends upon how much I enjoyed...
Overall: 4.5/5
CC rants:-
^ Well, first of all I should correct my previous review. This isn't similar to History's no. 1 founder in anyway..... This one leans more towards SOL compared to HN1F which is action packed.
^ Secondly this is for ya author-chan~
It's high time we have a disciple xD...
^ Also high time MC breakthrough next realm....
^ This is for the readers... MC is little intelligent compared to other novels so you won't get irritated by his dumbness..
^ And well... nothing else keep updating
Interesting read, so it might be good for it to go forward.
MC is OP right now to those who are wondering, not sure if it's going to keep on being that way.
This is translation review, not novel review.
If you are not familiar with it, webnovel has started westernizing most of the novels in 2021. This is awful practice that kills original novel. At best you get only names, places and organizations westernized and at worst you get half novel gutted and other half totally rewritten by translator.
With best case scenario you get only names, places and organizations westernized which introduces plotholes cause while names are westernized, actual writing and character culture arent. You get chinese way of thinking, chinese places and organizations translated into most famous western (USA) alternatives and as a result you see absurdity.
And with the worth case scenario, you are not actually reading original authors work, but some "translators" plagiarization cause half novel is removed (sometimes critical explanations) and other half is badly rewritten. And cause this requires so much work compared to normal translation, either webnovel is stealing original authors work and rewriting it (cause most of those novels dont come from qidian) or they are just using translators that dont know chinese so they are rewriting story with help of MTL (seen too many edited MTL translations lately on webnovel).
overall any westernized novel deserves automatic 1 star review.
I don't need to read the book to know it's going to be a banger. The Author never lets us down.
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Very good novel....nice balanced cheat.... level headed MC
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