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Super slow development. MC is not changing his charecter. He is not brave to face problem heads on. There is no goal for MC. Even he does not now his goal or will be goal and he has no vision.
the first 20 chapter's hooked me so decided to read the mtl and read upto 270 chapters
the reason the novel hooked me was his cheat, but this cheat is used less and less as mc progress. mc can get rewards by killing or defeating people and mc go nuts and fighting and killing evil sect people
in one of the earlier chapter it's said that MC's current sect is very suitable for cultivation but mc just leave and fighting around
his cheat give him cards that can even take out super beings and each time he kill one powerhouse he get another card so mc don't cherish these cards(these cards that should be used as ace should be rare but mc got one or two all the time)
overall after 270 chapter the plot is rins and repeat so I decide to drop it, his cheat made him too op.
Read the Mtls and hats off to the author to even include nationalistic ideology in an eastern fantasy , too much hidden racism ,
The demons described as white people
who btw come from western realm( indirectly America or white people)
Many will argue with me that it's just a world setting but no racism in any form is pathetic even if it is disguised as war.
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Everything is just so nice about this novel. It has a nice ML Sage, and I like his attitude. I loved reading it and I'm looking forward to the upcoming chapters
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Yeah, so i had to shamelessly give myself another review but this time i gave myself 5stars.
the last review i gave myself had a low rating because i had just started writing and to be honest i didn't have any confidence in my wirting. I know that i can delete it, but my first critic came as a reply under my review, so i am very reluctant in deleting it.
Although my confidence has increased, i am still a learner in this aspect.
and just to add a little something, a little over-view of MC's character. A lot of people critic it saying that he was described to be apathetic and then later on he started acting like an 11 year old ..
yes he was apathetic and he acts childish now, and there is a logical reason for that ( I can't say the reason because i feel like i would be dropping a spoiler.)
After coming to the new world he realized something that he never knew. if you want to know what then read the book...
Thank you ??...
signed: shameless/crazy author...
This is a good story but I must ask what happen to keido and big mom bc it seem they died and if they are who will be the empire in the new world?
Very good novel bro, Just you are telling the same thing in all the chapters.The skills are very OP and the mc is perfect for the story.....
