I'd grade the writing quality anywhere from B+ to A- approximately. No major grammatical errors, and the author's more than satisfactory command of English already places him miles ahead of at least half the other writers over here on WN. As for the story itself, reading this takes me back to the .hack franchise I used to love playing through (and watching) in my teens.Lastly, with regard to points for improvement? There's really not much I have on that end, considering what's already been written is already very good. The one bit of general advice I'd say applies here is to go back to your material and proofread it at least once or twice a month for any grammatical errors you may have missed at an earlier point.Well done overall.
Please continue updating it's really good. ..................................................................................................................
I really like these sort of stories where the main protagonist gets trapped inside a game. This story explores more options like the main protagonist is with his brother. Not many stories have this kind of setup! Good luck building up your world and its sytem, mate! ^^
To be honest I absolutely love the reading about the apocalypse from the view of the zombieThe concept alone drew me in as a reader and I can't wait for more keep up the amazing work
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From Chapter 1-96,The story starts off with MC which undergoes transmigration into a game world that MC had played and completed. Similar premise novels include dungeon defence and the amber sword so liking those means this novel is for you. Firstly, the story's directions seems just like any other transmigrated/reincarnation novel which is in a strange environment, try to survive as much as possible while knowing the future/overpowered methods. This is how the novels are structured and it is done really well following the adventuring/questing format. While reading ,I find myself interested as there is noticeable progress by the MC in becoming strong through getting overpowered skills and epic items but the lack of variety to the story may make this novel stale or typical if you are looking for something unique. Although, there is signs of kingdom building but it is not yet happening. Score is 3.5 for fast and welldone story.The Character is somewhat lacking as well with the MC's history not being properly explained and how he got into the world itself is unknown and the personality of MC can be supercold in ways like murdering people without much thoughts and although he was a gamer, he don't seem like one with his kind of intellectual mind and him threatening other characters so easily. Side characters are sadly not as focus in the novel so it is only focusing on MC. There are some items that shows the stats and ability but it unused 99% of the time. Got potential but its 3.3 score.World background is 3.9 as it starts off interesting with how there is multiple species and gods alongside different places to visit. The world is going to undergo a cataclysm and MC is trying to survive. The powersystem or class is normal like an rpg but the MC seems to break much of the rule and I always wonder if the world is real or not because the the characters is living and breathing but must adhere to certain game rules or restrictions.The update stability is 4.0, 2 chapter a day so 14 chapter a week which is not slow but it will take awhile to reach the completed 820 chapters.The translation quality is really praiseworthy and the one keeping me from reading because it is really ****** to understand and there is no grammar issues so I can read at one go without hesitation . However, there is a censorship in one of the chapters I read and many information is lost so I did not understand for awhile but it is not the translator nor the author faults. So 4.8 score. Good Job Translator.Overall score is 3.9, above average.
Interesting premise, and a pretty cool 'legendary class'.I feel like I'm reading a romance-type novel that has been put into a video-game shell. Kind of like "Pride and prejudice and zombies".Not that I'm complaining, I like it so far and I'm only 2 chapters in :)Looking forward to seeing how the story progresses.(Also we are around the same ranking - my book is 'My Necromancer Class', so I thought I'd check out your book out and I'm enjoying it, keep it up!)
Great start. Good story building at first. But as story progresses MC becomes more arrogant and idiotic. he starts doing idiotic things when he doesn't have power to protect himself.
I've just read the first 40 chapters and I can only say that I'm really conflicted about this novel. On one side I'm happy to see that the novel contains a lot of things that I like but on the other side I'm very disappointed that it also has things that I absolutely hate. The biggest plus is the setting, a guy who transmigrates to a world that is just about to go into a cultivation era and the mc gets a system with the goal to teach cultivation to as many people as possible. It's an interesting setting because the goal is not to be secretive, and that would open up the possibility of seeing an mc brag to his normal friends and actually do what he brags about (eg Mc: I can fly. Friend: yeah right, do you think you're an immortal and get a sword and fly away? Mc takes out sword, levitate it in the air and jumps on it). I have never seen this before and it looks like it is possible in this novel. And there are some other things that I think have the possibility of getting interesting story lines (eg involving the elderly first, having a hot not blood related sister but no interest in a relationship, the system so far has not given out missions that would require a lot of plot armor to complete). But for all the good things there are also bad things. The 2 things that are very noticeable is the use of idiotic young masters who pull out the big guns for the slightest provocation (the 2 young masters that were seen so far both had no backstory or build up, you meet them and they discover the girl they like is involved with the mc and directly sends out people to get rid of him, and the stupid thing is both of them actually have an interesting background story where it would be easy to show some of the information without giving away the plot). And the second thing has to do with the novel title and how the author ruined the title because he wanted to make a running joke about the mc, a joke that is not funny. The title makes you think the mc tricks some elderly in cultivating immortal cultivation techniques but although the elderly are the first to agree the mc has not told the elderly any lie about cultivation. The mc is completely honest and open about what he wants to teach and nobody believes him (which is funny the first time you read it but the first time it is mentioned it is mentioned by the narrator and that he was sent to the asylum, and instead of changing tactics he keeps on using the same tactic. The second time it is no longer funny and the 5th time it becomes annoying). The elderly eventually agree because they pity the mc, and in a sense you could say he has tricked them with that but to me that is not a good enough reason. I understand the author wants to use this as a running joke but I probably would have liked it better if the mc actually tricked the elderly to do some 'Chinese Yoga' which is actually cultivation, looking at the starting exercise that was used that could have easily been adapted to fit that narrative. If he used the Chinese Yoga as an excuse he could have even had a natural way to move from elderly to younger people but that chance was lost because of a stupid repeating joke that becomes more and more annoying with each time you see it
Once I started reading the story it made this novel is too good to put down. It the same but different from other novels. They need to post more chapters faster. Lol
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Honestly this is one of the few books I've read on here on WN that really has a good writing quality and enjoyable story plot. I just hope that the writer doesn't drop. This is a great book and even a blind bat can acknowledge that