I'm being generous the author doesn't know much about military campaigns or how soldiers act. The story also has the same old over the top descriptions like, they puked a liter of blood. I'm no doctor but that would most likely kill you
I am reading the story in its native language so I can’t rate the translation. Story updates every week regularly. The author tries to communicate if there will not be a chapter that week.
yesssssssssss another BL novel and definitely 5 stars for my favourite novel and love love love love love love love love love love love love you ????
I love this book so much if I had time to read everyday this book be the one
Good first chapter , the story sounds good but the synopsis needs a few changes ...good luck with your book.
The writing is decent with your usual grammar error and stuff. The biggest advantage this novel has is the scary part of it. My only complaint will be about the chp is too short.........................
Thie novel reminds me of legendary mechanic but I pove the concept of commanders. Overall just a unique concept and good read. Keep updating and ill keep reading author
I have read some chapters, and this story is great, the mc and the idea is just perfect. Keep going because this book has potential I do have some suggestions, since there is some flaws.
Nice novel. Very light-hearted and comedic. I like the system personality and how it's not just a tool for someone to use for their advantage.Mc is kinda wholesome too
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
Uhh, please anyone comment ;-; i wanna see what I'm doing wrong and what i should do better because next time i would like to start an actual 'Good' quality Novel. But if i need to continue with this novel i will just to gain Experience on what to do later on anyways cya ;-;
Please come back your story has so much potential please come back I need more ch