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I really like science fiction so I'm glad I discovered this story. Mixing sci-fi with high fantasy is very orginal.The beggining sequence in the lab is mindblowing.I really liked Silas and the creation of his character. Definitely my fave so far.I can't really say anything about the grammar and spelling but have not spotted any mistakes. I like your writing style - you can deliver complicated scenes in very clear way which is great for a non-native speaker like me. I wish this story success. Keep going!
Giving solid 3.0 pre-reading based on premise, might change after.Transfer memories to the brain of 1-month baby.... If this is not a cultivation novel, where laws of biology don't work, the baby is fried. To begin with, pre-adolescent brain is VERY different from an ***** brain - look up "Synaptic pruning". Secondly, infant brain doesn't have enough brain connectivity to begin with, to hold a full stack of life memories. Unless some very abridged, very packed version of "future vision" was sent, this would not work.
Suspense-filled, exciting.Definitely a book worth reading.It takes the reader on, throughout the entire story ?
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Really love this novel. I love the two best friends’ dynamic and how they try to stick to the script…and fail the next minute and just went in guns blazing. Nathan wouldnt have needed to bash himself lololol.Well, speaking of Nathan I guess my only peeve is that he does not get enough screentime? I do find Brian charming but Nats has little spotlight. Nevertheless, when it does shine down on him he can be a cool guy. Overall, great novel with a hundred chapters and counting. Its worth your time, campers ヾ(〃^∇^)ﾉ
Horrible translation, unoriginal story, rampant rasicm, and more. Read it if you want to lose all your brain cells Chinese propaganda. L book.
An intriguing plot line among the plenty of system novels on this platform. MC character is deigned nicely by the author- San. The world is created where criminals are living a good life which is in itself makes it very different from the other stories on the platform. Wanna see how Taro will become a godfather when his skills are nil.All the best for Spirity☺️
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Shameless review by the author as is apparently customary.This is my first work but I've been reading cultivation and fantasy novels on sites like this for 4-5 years now and have long outgrown the usual tropes and such, so this is my attempt to write a new story I myself would find refreshing.If you have any constructive feedback as you read, please let me know in the chapter comments so I can take it on board and adjust as I see fit.Thanks, and I hope you all enjoy!
I'm revoking my 5 star review cause i found out that this is a copy paste of the MTL of the original novel who writer is Fridge that can refrigerate i will give you 2 stars for posting this on webnovel and allowing me to find this great story
A great novel.If you are tired of those reincanators with OP skills,try this one.It is a marvelous novel and i can asure you that,you wont regret reading it