To be honest ...the flow of the story seemed fast yet at a good pace. There are some words here and there that are misspelled and some words I am unfamiliar with(like Sylphear is a god I have never heard of... unlike undine or Garuda whom I am familiar with). But if I have to say...they are not a big flaw at all since this story sucked me into it so much more than I expected it to. It was a really fun read
Although a little confusing at the beginning, we slowly find out more about the characters and how they came to be who they are and I can't recommend this enough to make sure you read a good chunk as the action is well written and the romance is not in your face, but it's still very satisfying and feels like we are reading a group of people cope there way through an apocalypse in their own way even if they may seem wrong, but that's what makes them more human and makes me personally relate to them.
plz don't drop the novel it's been 2 months since your last update it's one of the best sports novel I've ever read plz come back plźzzzzzzzzzzzzz
This is a wonderful story. I loved this. I read this in one go, and I am completely addicted to it. I just want to go into the book and read more. But unfortunately, I can't do that. So, I'll calm down my poor heart and wait for more. This is an awesome book. Everyone should give it a try. It is so good... Hope you all have a nice time with this talented author in his journey.
Shameless author self review. Still learning how to write and I hope that as I slowly progress through the story that my writing should get better and better as I go.
I have read over 130 chapters, the story has so much potential. The only thing i hate is that the POV keeps changing almost every other chapter. Some of the POV are not that important that the author put that the chapter can be skill in the title.
Not your cup of tea if you just want to relax and enjoy simple daily chapters. Different from stereotypical web novels that always repeats the same cliches. While intelligent MCs aren’t that rare anymore. This novel is one of the few that manages to have a large part of the story dedicated to the MC’s thinking while keeping it simple to understand, and still draw readers in. The MC isn’t a super intelligent genius who can figure out an enemy’s entire life story just from a single glance. The MC’s more of a regular person, who slowly acquired various skills while doing his best to stay alive in a crime infested city. He does his best with what he has.
Only issue I have is the occasional translation mistake. Like the monster that’s a giant mouth with legs, which is a grinner. Being renamed to “joker” for an entire chapter for no reason.
hahah, this book is amazing, as a fan of xianxia and cultivation chat group its amazing, I hope the owner can continue to update and aim for thousands of chapter ;;))
Amazing novel but I Hobe read also the complete of the Arabic novel with its old same way
can you make this and the the Arabic novel as to novels happen in parallel universe
Nice. And good
This FF is literally for prople Who knows nothing of naruto. There is so many plot holes I cant even read this shi. He’s so weak bruv. How are you an Otsusuki but cant handle your own ****n chaKra when your chakra passively increases your own strength? Like what? Imagine have so much chakra but cant even fight? The author said hIs mother was gonna train him jus for hIm to just learn about his clan. i dont really think that counts as training. Go actually watch the show and stop writing this nonsense.
Good characterisation, good story development and conversation between character to character is good . finally sex scenes are interesting to.