A decent novel ruined by what I assume is translation issues. It hurts me in a different way that MTL. I’m just bloody confused. Author forgets level ups, doesn’t explain anything about the world leading to absolute confusion, I don’t even KNOW what his pets do! The so called ‘tomb dreams’ are complete filter with 0 explanation. They shouldn’t even be written, they are just word filter that make it even more confusing. I don’t know if some of the issues are translator or author, but it’s still a cluster fk none the less.
Peak confusion was the chapter (spoiler alert) with the ape. Why tf and who tf thinks it’s alright to come kill someone over getting first place in school? Completely a force fed conflict that came out of nowhere.
Novel just makes no sense and my head hurts.
This novel is unoriginal. There's no debating that.
But the fact it's unoriginal isn't the problem. What is the problem is that it's not only the same concept, but it's exactly the same events as well. It's like the authors are following a guide. A guide which explictly states all the events, choices of the protagonist, and dialogue which must occur in the novel.
Generic is a word that's thrown around a lot. But this...this is truly generic.
"What if you could become the best League of Legends player of all time, overnight? "
Cual es la gracia de un personaje que independientemente que tan compleja sea la situación , todo le salga bien.
Los defectos son los que construyen al protagonista y si no los tiene el personaje no se siente humano , parece un robot ,un personaje unidimensional.
Vamos de las 100k de novelas que tienen que qidian , no pueden encontrar un solo autor que se digne a intentar construir una historia decente ?
No hay desarrollo de personajes , literalmente agarra cualquier otra novela de juegos , cámbiale el titulo del juego al del League of Legends y no podrás distinguir las diferencias.
You deserve a five-star author, the story is so realistic about a teenager struggling in poverty and how desperate he is to overcome it, you are truly a commendable writer, I don't usually read this kind of stories but this one was truly touching because this is the reality about the demon called money. I am glad I found this one. And this tells so much about the Filipino culture too. In my country, there are people who live like that and hope you will grant us with more chapters!
Xi Ansel is the G.O.A.T, wow I finally found something worth waiting for. My favorite list- Emperor domination, World defying dan god, human emperor and then emperor of death. Please Jack release 100 chaps fast.
MASS RELEASE!!!!
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When Brother Paranoid asks for reviews, I do what I don't otherwise bother to do and review. Unpredictable plot and not wish-fulfillment, I still am not sure how this low realm can permit such great things to exist.
Looking at other authors, this shameless ant will learn to give a ridiculous review. This ant would love comments to improve on the writing style. The format is a bit weird since this ant mainly writes on another writing platform.
I shamelessly rate this with the highest marks, simply because for me, this is the best, the best that I can do for now.I made this story because I love wacky Ideas like aliens and cowboys or ninjas in space. Well, I tried going for a martial arts in the zombie apocalypse. It's really enjoyable making up these people and stories. If I could could do better in some parts I would appreciate all critiques, and if I did well then it is very great to hear.If you like it then I would appreciate you're support, if not, thanks for giving it a read, and if you didn't read it, thanks for reading this review. Have a good day!
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Copy paste format deserves a copy paste review. it’s a clone of novels that where on here months before, completely unoriginal.
I was willing to give it a shot but it followed the example of all of those that came before it.
I really enjoyed this novel, the way this school has its own way of developing its students that is totally different from other schools, the teachers who are historical figures outside that this is the school that everyone would want to study
MC acts and talks like a young master villain who is planning to rob 10$ from a billionaire protagonist. It isn't funny, its cringe. If they could only transmigrate someone smart.