this is one of the dumbest novels i've read in a while. chapter 10 the college examination starts. 1.part: talent test, mc blows up the talent testing device because his talent is off the charts.2. part: kill at least 10 mummies or get disqualified, how does that make sense? our mc got a weak trash pet at the start bc he is an orphan with no funding(ignoring the system). his original pet is not strong enough to even kill one of them, so he would fail this exam because he wasn't born in a rich family or was lucky enough to pick a powerfull beast egg in school? completely disregarding his talent and potential? which post apocalyptic society on the brink, barely holding on, would squander that talent. because he wasn't lucky enough to pick a powerfull beast? he would be nurtured and given all the resources he would need to grow, in exchange for maybe 5-10 or more years of mandatory military service.
it's an amazing work of art.?the only slight off-putter is the minor grammatical errors, if not, it'd be perfect.
Classic, writing a story to make a quick buck and never finishing it.
I love that the MC wants natural growth and self hard work. The world was vast & mysterious. There's so much going on and had various factors for the plot but its not jumbled and the story flow so well. I cant stop reading.
I love it this novel is amazing at the beginning mc is a really evil naughty boy, but with the development, he become enlightened and his personality changes lotMC is not an unidirectional character and that's greatthe novel also has a lot of teachings about Taoism and Buddhism and live in generalos great you should read it
Everything about this novel is decent, excluding the number of updates in a week part. The grammar is good, the story is stable and doesn't change its plot randomly. Again, I would be happier if the author increased the number of updates in a week! What kind of author forces its readers to cultivate the dao of patience?!!
Welp sorry if there's any mistake or bad grammer ;)
I genuinely love the concept behind this, and the story in general. The reason for the 4-stars instead of 5, however, is the author's lack of proper punctuation. There are a great deal of run on sentences, and not nearly enough punctuation to even everything out. It's like the difference between saying "Let's go eat Grandma!" and "Let's go eat, Grandma!" As far as I'm concerned, the errors severely break the immersion, to the point where this story is more of a "sometimes" story, rather than an "all the time" story. Other than that, though, I love it :)
Author I have been looking for authors like you where have you been all this time. My name is Daoist370160 I truly like your novel. You have an awesome sense of humor. But I would truly appreciate if you improved your English, which I know will take time. I have made quite a few comments in a few chapters and every single one of them are edits on how the sentence could be better and sound better to read. I forgot which chapters I made the edits on but I there are quite a few edits that I commented next to each line which I wish you would edit. I am really happy with the novel and would like to wish you luck with the novel and your future writing career. I wish this novel would reach more than 2000 chapter and be among great novels like mortal journey to immortality, renegade immortal and the lord of mysteries. Good luck again
By the way Great story but I would recommend adding the harem to the list of people he will end up with in the end.[img=recommend][img=recommend]
I really like this story, it’s interesting and intriguing. Am looking forward for this to get chosen, it’s a story not long by chinese Webnovel standards but that’s alright. So far it has action, comedy and some sadness mixed in it. It’s all of this that I recommend to trial readers, I hope those with coin can help get this chosen because I sure can’t due to my *ahem* poorness. Overall I recommend this story although the beginning might put off some people, please bare with it.
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