Really great wirk. Especially how the MC is growth in his cultivation is nice. The characters have been well written. The background setting is also intriguing. Ut has the right amount of suspense & thrill.
Just gonna casually give meself a five star review here. Nice. Shameless action of day. DoneAny whoop, I'm enjoying the writing process. Hope you guys enjoy the read.You see that [Add to Library] button up there? Wanna press it? If you like the story, please press it. Is that enough words? I can post the review now? Yes? Tsk... Noice.
it's a little tough to read, but the story seems alright. I'll see if I can find a better translation, but I might have to resort to mtl... ??? Wish me luck brothers!
hello, Can you review my book----------------------------------------------------------------THE PART OF NO RETURN : FIRST HUMAN EMPIRE------------------------------ Please
How should I put it starts stereotypical, but within that first chapter every thing changes. Our MC has cancer and suddenly a demon pops up to make a deal. The plot is fast paced with plenty of action, but the dialogue and transition are weird. I don't know if that is the fault of the translator or the Author
Writing Quality: I love the authors breadth of vocabulary and effective sentence structure. The writing is clean and organized, making for an easy and enjoyable read. Stability of Updates:12 chapters have come out so far, with basically 1 chapter a day. So far stability is 5 stars.Story Development:The story has a nice pace. The intense parts are quick, not drawn out like many novels on here. The relaxing parts are relaxed. Overall the pace is a little quicker than most, but I don't mind that.Character Design:5 stars because it is just starting, and for 12 chapters the author does a good job of not revealing too much too quickly. There are your stereotypical characters: the ignorant, hard working main character. the mysterious and potentially dangers master/teacher. the hermetic, but kind and generous friend of the master/teacher. None of which are bad things. The story still has lots of room to develop and expand upon those basic character types.World Background:At 12 chapters there isn't a whole lot, which is to the authors credit. I like that the background is developed as the MC learns it. Being a kid from east jesus nowhere it makes sense that the kid is ignorant of the world.
Bruh webnovel should be careful, what if someone tells Disney ??. Like this is such a dog water move ?. it's not even a good fanfic. I wouldn't recommend.
It's a Sci-fi Novel guys, I'm a huge fan of sci-fi and the way this guy portrait his story it's actually not really bad, the detailed background and characters make this novep pretty lit. I recommend you this one???
Great story, the background and setting are well presented and interesting the characters are excellent and fun to read. The MC is great, a master of all yet has no idea how great he really is. Makes for some fun situations and misunderstanding.
The Quality of the Translation is not great, but its acceptable . The good points are this is a U N I Q U E story. I didnt see this plot on WN Yet. The plot is not great but its different, which us enough for me. Support it .
The raw name is疯了吧！你管这叫辅助？or go crazy ! You call this auxiliary The book is quite good and MC is op to the point of being able to do damage across large levels
I love pet noVels and this is a good one The personality of the special pets and their unique abilities show a creativeness not seen in other novels