Story till the end of the 1st volume was quite great. The MC's ability (Smoke) reminds me a character for HunterxHunter and I have not seen this unique implementation of it (even in the case of Mist). Love the so far ❤️. And hope you return back soon ?.
omg omg your new book is amazing !!!!! thank you so much !!!❤️?❤️?❤️?❤️?❤️?❤️?❤️ps: pls more chapters, i can't wait so long
Where can i fine a version of this for free? I'm broke and im not willing to spened money on this and chapers are realy short to. .................................................................
Too. Much filler speaking same thing in 10 different ways does not make it sound exp. Starting till middle was good but now it's like ****. The story is good but for each small climax one needs to wait more than 6 months to have few quality exp chapters and the rest are fillers which are expanded to fill slacks/laziness. Like nov,2019 end there was a series of few good chapter and now it's Almost April we are waiting for its continuation. Each chapter 80-85 % is filled with author narration how mc shits only 10% accounts to real development and that to is a filler. I am not saying the story is bad but you must be a follower of mad_snail to give good score. Sure it has unexpected twist and turns even few exp chapter for which author keeps us thirsty for half a year, yet we are his ***** still waiting for few exp that send our dopamine to high. So the is both loved and cursed, but what can we he is doing for $ and I agree it is difficult to make stiff exp chapter/turns every now and then. But its earnest request to author to please reduce the amount of your monologue to make the story not be hated by readers.
Author nim can you please up the update speed 1ch/ week is killing me
Hello i love your book but it lack followers readers, and rating, am not sure if you have any social media platforms so we can discuss better
its quite a random story, with such an unexpected plot, the characters are quite interesting with all of then having problems and difficulties, overall the story is quite nice, it lives up too its Dark Realism story.
This book is amazing, keep going!Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
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I like the concept and you went slightly off of usual main classes for MC also I like how you didn't go with the reincarnated idea its good but hard to make good unless you plan your story well overall good chapter
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A very enjoyable novel. Thank You!! The story is fastpace and it is fun to read. :)xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx