Why does the novels clearly from China used english names which is infuriating?
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Once again, another "I got a super op beast right from the start"
MCs name has been changed to Mike, since WN has been changing tons of trial read names to western-ish names. For that I give it a low translation rating.
Story development is that he gets maxed out charisma that only works on beasts. That's it. It was satisfying to read about John being eaten alive by bugs, but that's it.
MC is a poor boy with a poor family, and he needs to carry them.
Sounds exactly like that other novel that was on trial reads a few weeks ago where the MC was named "Link". Even the starting is pretty similar.
OP Beast check
poor family check
immediate beast tide to show off beast, check.
There's nothing that particularly stands out, the MC is a bit dumb, I would think that after a failed attempt at asking a girl on a date would make me question the charisma stat.
If anything, if this world is filled with beasts, has he never approached a beast to see if his charisma worked? It only worked when he was choosing a pet? How does that work? How did that dragon sense him from who knows how far away and was attracted to him. Was none of the beasts in the city attracted to him? Big plot hole.
Nice novel and I have enjoyed reading is so far. I do hope in the future that Qin Feng breaks out of his identity of being the reincarnation of KING and becomes his own person.
This Novel looks interesting, hope this will remain the same in later chapters........
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The story is enjoyable and fun at the same time. I like the Vampire girl character is well laid and the back story sounds cool. I want to read more of it.
Thanks for the work
It is really a very awkward story, but I like it’s situation. I didn’t understand on the chamber. Why dirt and cobblestone? Whenever I create a tunnel which is really important to me or unimportant I surround it with obsidian or iron blocks. At lest create an iron farm. It’s super simple. But have you ever faced an Creepysta? I seriously wanna know. At least Herobrine?
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There are quite a few problems with the translation. Why's the translator going with first name last name approach? Dai Li should be Li Dai. And please put some notes in places where Pinyin are used. The translator uses lao, which I assume is short for laoshi. I thought it was the guy's surname at first. There are also sentence formation errors, etc. after a few chapters.
As for the story, since this is the first sports genre webnovel here, it's quite interesting & feels fresh to read.
One of my favourite wish fulfilment novels..
Very original and detailed. Very good
This is the first time I'm leaving a review without being asked to. I really like this novel.
Not only is it particularly hard to find grammatical errors but the writing is so smooth that you would have to force yourself not to enjoy it. Its really easy to see yourself in the midst of the characters and thats hard to come by.
The story is a hook. I haven't read much cuz I'm busy writing a novel of my own but Lord this is Spirit stone worthy I wouldn't mind at all if this went premium.
If you like stories where the mc is legit the bad guy? Stories like that of the Joker or something, then I think you'd like this. Hey Author, keep it up, I may not comment often cuz I'm hurrying to the next chapter but you've got a loyal reader right here!