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An interesting story in an interesting world. I like, that there are some unique and interesting powers. Characters are relatable, especially the dorm senior. Well done author! Added to library and waiting for more!
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The story idea of needing of using a pay-to-play system is interesting. Unfortunately most of the sayings and catchphrases use so much of a specific cultures idioms that the translation is garbled on actions, thoughts and descriptions of various things. The mc is so obnoxious that it's hard to find him interesting. With a some solid assistance and some rewriting in other areas it would become a more passable read.
wroth it. definitely worth it. the horror and thriller elements sync with the story so amazingly that you can literally feel what the story wants to say. read it peeps, just read it.
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Just would like to say that the ntr is still in process and it still counts as ntr author.
But other than that its shaping up to be a pretty unique story also hate ntr and I want to kill everyone right now.
Started off great, built great expectations, struggled to meet the expectations. Went up the hill and nose dived straight into a trash bin. In all the ending is total and utter trash.
I was wondering why this resembled revenant so much lol, same author.
Hope this one last longer mate, also love that it doesn't have any fanfic qualities. Good for you and building a proper novel you can legallyy sell
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Ignore the first two reviews for this. Their writers are even more confused than they are making their readers. This novel is just as it is written in the description. It's also, as one would expect, hilarious and light-hearted.