Well honestly it's pretty good to read, just fix about the grammar and It's done, i'm Indonesian and support this novel, and one more is to fix the update posts schedule not like beetwen 3-8 pm(8gmt)
I don't usually write reviews because I don't know how to make one and have bad grammar, so I'll just write my opinion.
I like the story and the MC, he's pretty unique on a different way. The story is quite slow phased but I like it that why, it makes the world building more detailed.
You might sometimes be annoyed at the MC because he's not using his brain sometimes and a little bit childish, well for me it one of his good points, it made him different from the other MCs with edgy personality.
This novel is definitely a gem, I can't wait it to be popular so it can have stable update and many chapters.
Btw Author Luv U~♪
1st to comment and 1st to rate 5 star....................................................................................................................
Not sure why kakashi hatake likes it so much and did master Jeriah really write this if he did write it why doesn’t it say so also naruto could use this book and saskue also sai and probably choji
Where all my naruto fans at
Now am wondering if this the first time the author is writing a novel the story it's not bad problem is the author wrote as if it's just for the sake..it has no plot plus it's short including its chapters no taste at all it's so dull
I am absolutely loving this one.
Perfect english, great story and characters. At first i was a little angry by the Valkyrie but even she was developed enough for me to start liking.
I love this world, it's so different and fresh. Keep going man!
Writing quality is terrible no proof reading was done and the english in the novel is horrible worse than a translator. The story develop ment is trash because author is a lazy writer for example “I was betrayed by my best friend and he knows everything about me.” Like what is that. Suxh lazy writing no build up, no climax, no story telling, no nothing. All the characters are bland and cliche author didnt put any originality into this book at all. The poor background can be attributed to authors lazy writing and lack of detail. All in all it feels like a 10 year old writing a book and to be honest it is terrible.
this Is truly fun and refreshing to read, keep It up ???
One of the best Naruto fanfic!!!!!!??????
I read until chapter 12 and I couldn't go over it, the characters are just annoying, like all of them, some of which, if were my irl friends, they would get a punch in the gut, like I can't say too much about it since I didn't even read half of the available chapters, but like with this first impression that I had access to, it's not that good of a read
It was a good read. As what the author had said on his review, his sentence structure needs improvement. But welp, I also need it for mine so overall, this story good. It has interesting and unique plots, and even tho the pace was a little slow at start, it did not disrupt my immersion while reading it.
This novel is good and you are doing a great job. This translation is good too so thank you very much. I think this novel deserves 4 stars?