Adil_Hensley

" Something something. "

It's not gonna happen again.

I have always written daily and never planned ahead, which was intentional. I wanted to enjoy this novel as a reader would and therefore never knew where the story was heading.

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The story isn't a terrible one but unfortunately the writing doesn't carry it across- this is due to a combination of mistakes in word choice and grammar as well as a general lack of understanding of the meanings of words. If you love reading MTL books for some reason, it should work for you but otherwise I would suggest you steer clear. If the author gets an editor and re-writes the chapters, I may re-review.

[System activating…]Wait, I’m getting my own System now?! Fang Ning was overwhelmed by great elation. This was definitely not a dream, he happily thought, before his face darkened like coal the next second.[Discovered the Host’s untreatable, chronic terminal disease. Synthesizing solutions…][Terminal disease analysis completed. Stage 4 Severe Procrastination, confirmed to be untreatable. For the System’s survival, commence immediate takeover of the Host….]‘What? My body is being seized by the System?’ Fang Ning was very confused by the current proceedings. He knew that he was quite a lazy person; he would never go for a haircut before his hair reached his chin, and he would only do the laundry when he ran out of clean clothes to wear. Even so, he threw his socks, underwear, jackets, and everything else together into the washing machine…[This isn’t just ‘quite lazy’,] Fang Ning heard the System conversing with him, [It’s ‘extreme laziness.’]‘What kind of f*ckery is this!’—Several months or more later— [Fang Ning, Power-level: Pond-level Powerhouse. Description: Water level… hard to determine. Take heed to not go into battle.][The System, Power-level: Lake-level Powerhouse. Description: Flesh body extremely strong, speed extremely high, attacking power extremely strong, survival power extremely strong… God of Battle, unparalleled.]Fang Ning heaved a large sigh of relief upon reading. The larger the body of water, the better.. This time, at least the Celestial Dragon summoned will be one level higher than the current Pond-level System. Nobody should have the ability to fight against it, he did not need to personally control it.He was getting addicted to being seized…A/N .P. s. That's the whole think I think about this Great and Precious Story (-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥

Yes, it is. Otherwise, he is troublesome, and this is real trouble. How could he eavesdrop us? Or just my voice is too loud. It is not my fault.

"System is that you?" He felt idiotic as he realized that the system couldn't talk.

"Ah, you guys are here?"

[shuffling]

Ten minutes later, in her frustration she flew up into the sky and tossed him into the earth.

I know he was only doing this out of pity but i thanked him anyways. It tasted amazing. How could such a simple breakfast be such a delicacy ?