It is one of the hidden gem in this platform, as our mc(Fan Li) with his weak cultivation guides to top with the help of system is truly a great experience to read the whole book. Author please gives us regular updates, it really deserves it.
Chapters one through about eighty were amazing. I was really enjoying the story's novel ideas. Lots of fun. However, after about chapter one hundred, it fell way off, and I didn't even bother finishing it.
"Ms Seoyeon, can you print this in four copies? We need it for a meeting by 3 pm."
that s sounds like a nice story, but it could be better
I like this story from the bit I read specifically chapter 2, you have fun little dialogue, and the writing style is something I'm familiar, since I also started that way, I see keep on writing using dialogue if you want, it makes the story very unique, but if you want to change it that's also an option you could take, either way keep writing.
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it was good until the author disappeared .....so good in fact that i am writing this review in the hope that the author makes a come back.
Best story fantasy plot, I think it will be explosive. Writing quality is good with best story development and clear world background. I will support you author. Well done!
It is very fun and new but I don't will it be good as it continues in the future but I am looking forward to it.xdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxd
Hi! This is doris, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
Read reviews that was written on the novels opening page. The first chapter reads in chronological order as a spy novel should. The first chapter is just a little bit long and could be broken up into more than just the one. Other than that, very well writing with suspense included
Muhahahaha! I have appeared once again as a random person who simply does a review to support the author even though I have not started reading.