Is the mc sharp minded and cunning or dense
I'll have to read further in order to give a more fair review. But as per the condition we agreed to on WebNovel forums, I'll list my thoughts so far.The grammar is quite polished. I can tell that the author has been at it for a decent amount of time. And usually I wouldn't recommend the usage of a first person POV in a fantasy novel, but in this story, it's well done. As a reader, I could feel the emotions of the protagonist as she struggled to recall how she ended up in that void.Another intriguing aspect of the story was the number of relevant characters introduced from the get go. The author doesn't name them, but instead gives them titles that are easy to follow during an action-packed scene. I assume that they'll be given names later. It'll be a neat tie-in to see.
I'm currently 67 chapters into this novel and decided to give a review which is RARE for me. I hardly give novels reviews but I felt this one was necessary due to the genre being twisted from the normal reincarnation-with-a-system plot, the writing skill of the author progressing throughout the novel so far, and the amount of WORDS IN EACH CHAPTER. I generally fly through books on here like RSSG and Monster Paradise and hit 2,000 chapters in a week and a half but I'm only 67 chapters in after 2 days of reading. That's INSANE! I truly recommend reading this if you are looking for something different but follows along the same idea of fantasy, conflict, and adventure.
THE BEST WRITTING STYLE...5/5 rating without a doubt, from the perfect set of words and grammars that form like an array who can easily hooked the minds of the readers,
NO TO ENGLISH NAMES. ENGLISH NAME == I SKIP. NO TO ENGLISH NAMES. ENGLISH NAME == I SKIP. NO TO ENGLISH NAMES. ENGLISH NAME == I SKIP. NO TO ENGLISH NAMES. ENGLISH NAME == I SKIP.
This is a very great story The foreshadowing things are really awesome I mean there is really a need for this kind of army Kingdom world building otherworldly awesome books . what the **** is wrong with you over webnovel this is a book you must release at any fucking cost
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Yuri is enough to hook me up... Other than update others are really good. Just pls don't drop it as I suffered so much from dropped novels I like... :')
I'm detecting "summoning the holy sword" and "the amber sword" vibes from the story ..all in all a very good story..looking forward to its release, my excitement has been stroked!!
Simply, I like it.This one gets to the standards of pro American novels, edited and with good author who can drive the story with exciting adventures. Mixing Qi and Elves (I know they are not but...) inside Game like world is interesting concept I didn't find elsewhere. MC is likable black guy with good experience before getting to another world and doesn't dwell on "it's a game" mindset. I would like more engagement from side characters (elves) but that is really me being picky. There are only two cons, occasional typos (very, very few) and that is doesn't have 700+ chaps already.I come here after Phoenix Phire, which is of similar concept and I would recommend to everyone here hungry something like this.
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Its really discouraging to see this novel becoming premium. And here i thought the translator claim to be an avid reader. I loved this novel and was the only one i enjoyed on this site. Dropping this as of this moment. The premium system is complete utter BS.