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Overall, this was a great read. The personalities of the characters have been perfectly meshed out in my opinion and the main cast are repeatedly shown, unlike some other novels where they just get forgotten or vanish for some time. The main character surprisingly has a brain which was a sharp contrast to the novels i have read till now. He doesn't hesitate to use his money, kill people, use his influence and relationships to his own benefit. I feel like the buildup of the first meeting of the mc and the fml is getting a bit dragged out but it's going to be resolved soon anyways. The world background is actually pretty good. I especially liked the unique magic system used in this novel which was pretty innovative as compared to the novels where the people simply have to imagine doing the magic or make some circles. The only problem I've had with the novel so far is the updating stability. The chapters are released at an extremely slow pace and there isn't even a fixed schedule for it. Only 2 chapters are released in a month which makes it look like it'll take years to even finally let Eva and Rayne meet. If the chapter release was even like 2 per week, I'd rate this a 10/5.
This has a good and nice plot with a lot of good characters but the author has a long way to go and grow it's a nice book but the grammar throws me off can't wait for future chaps
Oh my God. I got excited. so many times toward each update of this story. It completely blew my mind. It managed to surpass my high expectations AND be nothing at all like I expected.
Even thought this is similar to "The Legendary Mechanic" and "I am a Legendary Boss", this one is still very good. I kinda preffer this one as "The Legendary Mechanic" since this one is like a cultivation world. And the MC is funny. Hope QIDIAN put this fast, on voting pool.
It's nice seeing such great originals from time to time.
Honestly, I suck at writing these, I'm already way past my limitations. Any lo-140!
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
new chapter please. . . .
Very cool book. Love the characters and the humor. Needs a dragon. Make it two. This book is for people who like both Harry Potter and James Bond, but think hey, what if...girls. Yeah.
Beautiful is the perfect word for this story .A story of two teenagers who help each other pull through the trails and tribulations they both go through
im gonna Read It Later Nice Fist Chapter ???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Realizing I havent left a reveiw and I’m a faithful reader...??u200d♀️ The storyline is awesome. Plus the author knows his facts well and it’s shown throughout the whole story. There is never a dull moment and will definitely keep you wanting to read more. The authors writng style is both different and fun which keeps me here. Im terrible at reviews so just go read it for yourself. ? I’ma terrbile person lobs sorry for just now leaving a review. ?
