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Writing quality: I'd say it's pretty good, though it may be a bit unrefined and messy. The grammar is fine, with some occasional mistakes that get corrected almost immediately once pointed out.
Stability of updating: More often than not, the author updates 2 chapters a day. Sometimes, there's only one chapter, and rarely, there's no chapter at all. When that happens, the author tries to compensate in the future. Emphasis on "tries".
Story development: The story is kind of rushed but it's developing quite nicely. Uses clichés but I'd like to think the author uses it in a way that makes fun of or builds upon it, rather than just copying and pasting the cliché. Cons are that romance is kind of unrealistic, an indication that the author is inexperienced in that field.
Character design: I like the characters. There are some that are black-and-white but there are hints that they'll get fleshed out in the future. Also WARNING this is a harem, but the girls exhibit different personality traits and are unique from each other.
World background: This is the part where it's really just straight ripped off of other stories. Well, I can't say for certain since it's only in Chapter 39 and the world might get more interesting in the future, but so far it's bland and boring.
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it is pretty good, though there isnt much basis for me to be saying this since there are only 4 chapters out right now. the system has a lot of potential, at least imo, and it seems like an interesting story. does it have romance or harem? idk. even so, if there is harem i hope its good at least. I already like the general vibe of the novel, so i hope this one is further translated.
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Good novel about modern weapons in a cultivation world. What if you could have a conventional empire, in a cultivation world with no concept of technology? If you like these things then you will like reading this novel.
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Until now (for me) this novel is perfect. I´ve read many novels on webnovel and most of them aren´t as well written as this. This novel just seems so unbelievable good thougt through and realistic in terms of the decisions the main character makes and how situations unfold. Thank you for your work author, i think your novel has really great potential! Many greetings
It's so cooll author . I really like it. Since I read just the first chapter, it's very interesting to continue my reading. Keep coming it. We are hear to support you.
I highly recommend this, although at first, it might seem confusing, when you dig deeper into the story, you'll start to appreciate and enjoy it. I recommend this to those readers who prefer romance to fantasies!
Author, I am telling you with the right character development, this one can turn out to be a great novel, Theme is GUN SYSTEM is very well selected, a new concept, keep on going, waiting for new releases, already added it in my library
This novel has me hooked the story, characters, and world building sucked me in and I want more. On the other hand grammar is pretty bad I would recommend to use grammerly it's free and will automatically fix basic grammar problems. I cheat and use it on my English papers lol. Keep up the good work cant wait too see what happens next!!!
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