Não vale a pena, história sem sentido, protagonista que é um suposto velho de 200 anos é mais retardado que um adolescente. Nunca li tanta bobagem e Deus ex Machina na minha vida.
Nothing deep critics, i have enjoyed it.
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I still haven't read any chapter yet, just the synopsis so I will give three neither good nor bad.
Anyway, I only have one way to describe this based on the synopsis
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honestly this novel so far has been great Its actually really a fresh story with an interesting universe I just hope the other can keep moving forward with it I'm positive it will eventually grow in popularity so keep it up author
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I'd probably give my own story here 3.7-4-ish stars, writing quality has a few past/present tense mistakes, some writing errors and confusing sentences, and overly repeated words, but is mostly clear and 'enjoyable' to read. I think I did an okay job on the action, but I don't have enough experience with that to tell.
There will only be one chapter for this. So obviously 5-stars.
I only gave myself 3 stars for story development, as it's too short a story to really test any natural/interesting developments, developed as expected, maybe did an above-average job explaining things.
I personally found the characters fun, and was somehow able to give them slightly different personalities in such a short story, nothing too multilayered. Can't really brag, but I think I made some fun, fairly well-written characters.
I had lots of details fleshed out for the plot, world, city names, history, blah blah that didn't really fit in. Given how short the story is, I'm not going to be too harsh on myself over not being super detailed. Though I will say I should've described the fauna/landscape of the area and at least attempted to depict the alien world outside of a single building.
Thanks for reading my review of my own story, now take off your pants and I'll give you a cookie.
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And yes, I’m shameless enough to give myself five stars. ✨
This is my second novel and my entry for WSA 2022.
I hope y’all support me!?✨
Also, constructive criticisms are allowed?
Turn your brain off and read type of novel. MC is annoying and stupid. World background: Chinese young master.Character design: Chinese young master.Story development: Chinese young master.Simp MC gives rise to the thought of strangling him to death.
Great writing quality! You can easily tell what the writer is trying to convey without hassle.Stability of updates? could be better, but everyone has their own paceStory Development; Full Immersion! You're in it from the first chapter, so it's much better than some others I won't mention. Giving credit where it's due...Character design is flawless.World background is unique.Just a bit slow on the release.