At least give us a hint when will the next chapter come out or why isn't the author updating a new chapter, people demand MORE of this beautiful story and are waiting to the returning of the author and the chapters to come.
Very good. Keep up the good work. Good Original novels are very rare nowadays, everywhere it's just trash novels with ****ty prose structure which is just a pain to the eyes. Among these your novel truly stands out as a gem. Just don't drop the story. ????????????????????
Great history just a bit to much into the *** part but still great its a must read one of my favorites right now keep up the good work im waiting alot from this
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This is an enticing story which I really hope gets picked up for continuation soon. I’m enjoying the decently interesting quests and the unique main character with a outside the norm for stories personality.
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Lucky MC manages to have everything go his way - not what you want then come and give this a read, abandoned by his mother and loan sharks after him thanks to his father this MC only has his brother till he dies.So what to do dive into a game world and see what happens next.Luck is good or badBut his is so terribleFriends turn it around
Just under 20 chapters in and I think it's a great story with a unique premise. In my opinion though, this is probably some of the best quality writing I've seen on this app. Very few grammatical errors and no major inconsistencies that constantly kick you out of your groove. I think that's what I appreciate the most. Would highly recommend. ??
Short review of this novel is cliche OP mc cultivation novel, but this novel knows how to keep you wanting more althought you already know how it ends. This novel has good writing quality and less spelling misstakes than this review. Character design is little lacking some peaplo dont get enought backstory. Some on other become little annoying as novel goes on. Stability well its sadly finished novel. World is intrsenting althought lot of keeps missing because lot ended. Now the best part of this novel is big suprise when in comes to romance in cultivation novels. This is not harem. this novel has very good slow kind romance. This review doesnt give justice to this novel, but i neeted to write this because when i saw words END in the last chapter. I felt saddnes, happiness and empty. Novel rarely gives those feelings so i wanted give little justice to this hidden gem. ❤❤❤❤❤❤
i think its boring, also what is the point of making the mc's class need 10 times more xp to level up if the author is going to give him an 10x xp boost immediately after anyways. If you like OP and fast growing mc and don't mind low quality writing you can consider reading it.
love the story keep it going definitely a new direction
Poor guy, sees the love of his life getting married to another guy and then gets hit by a truck and has his face smashed in. Then he goes to a cultivation world. Oh and be becomes a woman lol. Well, seems like an interesting start, lets see where it goes from here.