Well writen story, author managed to balance amount of tropes, and thanks to that as of chapter 66 there has only been one mc vs arrogant young master scene and no face slapping. Quality of writing is really good and stable, unlike most novels out there where authors/translators familiarity with proper grammar and punctuation is at "can it be eaten?" level, and mtl is a way to go. Pacing is good, multiple POVs contribute to reader being aware what is happening with other characters (and there isn't any "XYZ pov" commentary). One thing that i have on mind though is lack of significant backstory surrounding MC and his friends/lovers(not enough teases). World background is already laid out, thanks to which a situation where protagonist is akin to a carp going on a jumping spree through dozen consecutive dragon gates (*coughMGAcough*) hopefuly won't happen, as author would have to introduce another dimension(physics) for it to be a surprise. Overall story is interesting, presenting solid background, without there being typical infodump chapers. There are no greek philosophers here, so we don't see cultivation progress measured in levels or fighting prowess being put into linear equation. One thing author may wish to spend time on is expanding vocabulary beyond common purview, so as to one may gaze with glazed eyes, beholding writers splendor and ingenuity.
Gosh. I love this book so freaking much. The way rishika stays strong after what she goes through. Her personality is just so amazing. The character development is amazing. And the favorite part of books is when people realize their mistake like Rishan will realize his mistake for not trusting his own sister.Overall I love this book. ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
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In like your writing here. Although I have to note that there are some typos, I think you should check again before uploading the next one. I really like Maggie as the filler! Can we meet more of him in the future?? Peace out.
Outer space novels can be a bit tasking for any writer. But, you are really doing a great job with it. The ML character is nicely done, the world is well thought out and the story line is progressing well. And, the writing quality is really good. Well done.
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Its really good. I honestly think it's better than reincarnation of a living god.The MC is well thought out and his mind works just like you would think a demon would.
The english is terrible. As a native english speaker I can say that with the utmost confidence. It's strange though. There are no spelling mistakes, but the actual sentences are mashed together like bundles of words out of order.So unless you have some skill when it comes to interpretation and the time to read some things several times, don't read this novel.
Mind-blowing experience so far, the story interagration of action, comedy and drama is fantastic, not to mention it has awesome world building, and very intriguing plot. The pacing is ok, nothing too wild, and writing quality is top notch, literal perfection. I see nothing wrong with this novel, and so should you. and to the author, GREAT WORK MAN, WHATEVER YOURE DOING, KEEP DOING IT CAUSE ITS GOOD. Wish you best of luck mate?
Really an enticing novel its going better way than I thought its really good and I recommend it for you also in the first I didn't really liked as I was thinking just to see what kind of novel it is! It literally really caught my attention and its not just your regular kind of novels but have its own building type mystery background, op parents, adopted its just a somehow like M G A but our mc kinda be op
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