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I gave it 5 stars because it is so bad.It is so bad to the extinct that i can't live without the daily realease.It is so bad that i can't even stop rereading it.
I'm back for the reboot and it is better than it was before
Author here, first chapter is a bit short, but I plan on releasing longer chapters as I go along. First time writing a novel but hopefully it will contue to be interesting. Definitely not for those under 18 as the story progresses. The relationships are not going to just be bang and next so I'll try build them rather than protagonist banging like 1k people, but his harem will have interesting characters that are not often in others!Enjoy
Wtf??, what is happenning? Why are there Original Novels spawning in here now? Is there some kinda bunch of bonus and stuff?!! Anyways so this novel is kinda new to me, because it uses a girl as an mc to a vrmmorpg novel so maybe it will be good. I am really expecting some ******* of usage of her skill as a mage who controls winds I really hope she is creative enough to unleash the full potential of the thing we breathe in.
hey just asking is this dropped ? don't wanna waste time ?
That is interesting and embarrassing at the same time he is going to have powerful monsters protecting him but if he gets into a fight by himself he will be beaten by a two year old
Okay so let me just say this upfront: the power dynamic between Shi Jianchuan and Qin Ya is absolutely delicious and I am HERE for it. Like, on paper, she's the rich heiress and he's the scholarship kid—she has all the money, all the social power, all the confidence. But reading this, I got the distinct impression that SHE is the one who's actually vulnerable and HE is the one holding all the cards without even realizing it. Think about it. Qin Ya literally confesses to forcing herself on him in college, and instead of being horrified, Shi Jianchuan's reaction is… what? His ears turned pink. His eyes got misty. He said NO but he didn't actually push her away hard. The text literally says the tips of his ears flushed a beautiful shade of pink. That's not the reaction of someone who was traumatized. That's the reaction of someone who was overwhelmed and conflicted and maybe, just maybe, wanted it too. And now? Now the tables have turned. She has amnesia. She doesn't remember any of it. She's the one chasing, the one pleasuring, the one saying 'I love you so much' while he's the one sitting there with a love letter in his bag that he hasn't even opened yet. He's the one who remembers everything and chooses to stay silent. That's not weakness—that's a different kind of power. The scene where she watches him sleep in the car is peak character revelation. She's looking at him with this reverent, almost worshipful gaze, and the narrative tells us straight up: 'She really had fallen for him at first sight upon entering university and then launched a series of aggressive pursuits.' But then it cuts to her thinking 'If she were in his shoes, she would have probably wanted to kill the other person.' That self-awareness? That's growth. That's her realizing the monster she used to be. And Shi Jianchuan—oh man, Shi Jianchuan. He's called a 'saint' in the text and I get it now. He could've run. He could've blocked her. He could've told her everything and watched her squirm with guilt. But he doesn't. He stays. He hums along when she talks about her day. He lets her dry his hair. He says 'Qin Ya, I'm a man' and the way the text describes his obsidian-dark eyes concealing 'turbulent waves'—that man is fighting a war inside his own chest and he's choosing to lose gracefully. The love letter detail is everything. It's in his bag. It's been there the whole time. He hasn't read it. He hasn't thrown it away. It's this physical manifestation of everything unsaid between them, this thorn that keeps stabbing him, and he carries it everywhere like a secret talisman. I need to know what's in that letter and I need to know it yesterday.
Hello, shameless author here.My third novel on Webnovel. I had a hard time finding new ideas for my new story. I've read various novels, but they don't help much. Even if an idea came up, it didn't feel right to me.This went on for days and frustrated me. And finally, I decided to open my game directory, which I hadn't touched in a long time because I was busy writing. You know, to refresh my mind.And I started playing Rimworld again, one of my favorite games. It was a simulation of managing a colony to survive various hardships.So, I thought, why not just write with inspiration from that game? After all, no one have written about the theme.Enjoy!
I can recommend this to my friends since they were a good story inside of this novel, not mentioning in terms of the title, but hoping for more quality of the novel, since it give a good story so does the translation too.
Aaahh, finaly, i think this novel, Daedalus, and The Mech Touch are what makes Webnovel original novels the best new writer ones out there in the internet, there has been some jewels on RRL, but now it's time has passed, and there this new generation writers that are so amazing. Allright here's come my review.First off right on the bat, we get a nice prologue setup, that get us into the mood wanting to know more. The characters are getting fleshed out, somes not that much, it's the beginning of the novel, and there's tons of new characters, but what is really nice here, is you won't get one dimensional people in any point of the story. And that is great, there's tons of leads for many possible "main plots/sublots?".Well there's room for many things amazing things, as said, there's second role characters or even tird wheels, that feels like they want to "breaths" more into this story, giving it even mroe depths than it has at the moment.This leads to a conclusion where you got a badass MC, that use it's heads to use what he gots efficiently, without being a pushover nor a big studs rampaging everywhere, plus we got hints that his top aint it in the Universe, so as i said, it leads to a lot of promising futures.Dig into it! You won't be disapointed! Ah! and the Author is jsut so dedicated to this sotry, he works from 5 to 6, got family life with a new baby, writing this novel from 8 to 12pm, i mean come on, theres a patreon up, we all can share some loves to him as he does to us. BIG UP!
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