Really good novel, I find the power system very intresting, the world development is good as well, author only needs to work on evoking emotions or tensions, i don't know if it's only for me but, I couldn't feel much emotions when reading about character death's, and mc back story. that's the only thing i want you to work on, apart from that, the book is really good, i don't know if you're planning on adding romance but i think this is a good time to add that (ch 333)
