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The storyline is intriguing, and the characters are perfect. The author controlled the pace of the action so well that it enabled readers to have a great read. This is an exciting book that fans would undoubtedly enjoy. It is a gripping adventure with great characters and an exciting plot.
Story is unique. Keeps up the interest of readers. Please release more chapter .Good story, thank you for the story.Keep up the good work.If possible please do mass release
Okay I would not be surprised if this novel wins WSA. No, I mean like for real. It has all the ingredients to win it AND the writing is publication quality. 5star does not do it justice. 1. Writing quality: PAR EXCELLENCE. NO typos, grammatical errors. Vocabulary congruent to the story and setting. And words are lucid and not unnecessarily convoluted. Flows easily.2. Stability of Updates: stable lol3. Story development: superb pacing. Doesn't dawdle, gets into the thick of things right away without compromising the pacing. Very very interesting twist on the transmigration/system genre and you do not have to be a fan of the genre to like it, you will like it either way. There are the elements of an epic story that you will know about pretty early. Also, political conflict is there, which makes it even better for me. lol. 4. Character Design: Superb simply. The MC only really interacts with the system but you can already tell he will be a fun MC to follow. Fun and brave, the elements of a perfect hero. And the heroine is compelling too. :D5. World Background: Superb. Beautifully explained by the system without making it sound weary and expositional. REALLY GREAT WORK. Will definitely stay in my library. I cannot wait for Alex and Archmage to speak with each for the first time.
I loved the book very much, it is well developed, but it can always and always get better, now it's up to the author ... I hope people like it, I liked it!I loved the book very much, it is well developed, but it can always and always get better, now it's up to the author ... I hope people like it, I liked it!I loved the book very much, it is well developed, but it can always and always get better, now it's up to the author ... I hope people like it, I liked it!I loved the book very much, it is well developed, but it can always and always get better, now it's up to the author ... I hope people like it, I liked it!
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This novel really took me by surprise and I want more people to try it, if you read the first 10 chapters and still aren't interested on this novel, then maybe it's not for you. This story is takes a very unique approach to the concepts of wizards and I sincerely hope it gets more recognition
The translation is so-so. The story is about a man who reborn as a soul and can't get out of the jellyfish. This man go for a long jouney to become a true jellyfish god. The development is also give me a so-so feeling. Now we don't even have anything to read. Why don't you just delete it up?
A very well thought out and beautiful design. Looks like a lot of time and effort when into this. Over all not finishes but so far an amazing read.