A few moments later, Lados was asleep in Nerissa's arms. It was her turn to lay worried and awake on their bed.
"Just eat and make yourself full, arasseo? Don't do that again or else I'll be the one to do it to you." Seojoon scolded her.
Placing him down carefully on the bed, the two men shifted away to make room for the small figure who followed them from behind.
Ellen gave way and said it was Mrs. Dale who first had me.
Veer laughed and said "How can I see them? We are in different worlds and it is not easy crossing the boundary unless you have achieved perfection in the stage of abstraction. Also, it is not easy for them to enter the mortal world due to its low soul strength restriction."
As if understanding his feelings, the bird happily perched itself on his shoulder.
She knew crying was no use since she didn't want to get dehydrated, or even more so than she already was. So she packed up her stuff, dried of her tears, and went searching for a body of water. She didn't know which direction she was going in or what part of the forest she was in but she knew she had to travel fast. Taking a deep breath, she took off in a random direction, never looking back.
My first issue with this story is the COMPLETELY UNPROFESSIONAL TRANSLATOR. This translator like to delete chapters that do not fit his moral requirements. The readers are often confused do to missing critical plot points. In my opinion this is the worst thing a translator can do. Their job is to translate the story, not to create or edit. I like this story, but there are problems with the World Background. I lot of things are improbable or completely unexplained. For example, the MC is a genius Armsmaster. However, there is no real description of this magical profession. We are only told that the MC knows how to assemble and disassemble machine guns and other modern artillery. So naturally she can assemble magical components as well...
it's so good ive already added in my library
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I would just state out the author's problem1. author needs to create a long chapter, maybe 1k to 1.5k words per chapter2. if the author is seeking a contract, he should really stop using emoticons3. author needs to work on paragraphs and spacingaside from all these, the story is quite interesting, and I won't lie I'm really a fan of history, but the author needs to work on his writing skills, maybe try reading a few books and you'll get the hang of it
An interesting concept, unfortunately poorly implemented. The beginning was too confusing and the development was even worse. dropped before locked chapters.