it's a good story with minor flaws, that being as the story progresses the MC's magic doesn't last as long as in previous battles but ends up being a plus because he's not so overpowered and makes the story boring.
Can a person be too good at his craft? I'm starting to think Lumydee has it set out to bankrupt me (my poor coins)...Even after I told myself, I wasn't going to read it, the temptation was too strong, luckily it seems he is vacation this week (hopefully), it gives me time to save up, lol. This novel like all his other novels are addictive, so reader beware!!! Once you start thus novel, you will be hooked. Enough of the chit-chat, I need to get back to King of Technology, hopefully that can tide me over long enough for him to update the rest
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I only ask you to mention the power levels, as it is very confusing to know how strong the mc is[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
the title should be, mc logs in and beats game. the mc is so op its stupid, each time something happens he gets plot armor to protect him. guy dies and gets a title undead that let's him negate death with a chance to rez on spot. it's a waiste of
If the author of this novel was 12 years or younger: Great concept! You are an intelligent young author with good ideas. Please develop your writing and let us enjoi your works in the future.
If the author is older... at least 16 or more.... ARG!!!
Usually I like this kind of story - Beast-Taming, getting Stronger, a system for adds. However, in this story it is presented so plainly and... arg!
-First of all, the language, even if machine-translated, is kindergarden-level.
-Szene-Descriptions are awfull in their composition, especially the fights.
- I am only at chapter 14 or so, but the plot is jumping and jumping ahead, with sequenses and szenes other novels would make 3-12 chapters for AT LEAST, which here are implemented, rushed down and... not usefull at all.
- Power-jumping is the next thing. Just a few sentences ago something was explained to only work at higher level, MC does it earlier... with no explenation for HOW! It was just neccessary - NOT!
- Dumb characters, which are so 2D, that I fear they could degrade to 1D with a little less care...
- The resoning of the MC and the characters is another thing and... "Ah, he is doing somthing dangerours... but he is MC... he says he wants to do it... how could I forbid it, even thought I am responssible for his safety?" WHAT KIND OF LOGIC LEVEL IS THAT????
ARg! I m frustrated, because the idea behind the story seemed good and interesting, but - I am not sure if that is TOO hard - the author makes nearly EVERY mistake an author can make in the development at the beginning AND seems not to care about his own naming of techniques, at all..
Sorry, I am frustrated....
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Not my cup of tea but it's perfect for those who like submissive mc and masochist I guess? well that's all I can say about this novel ()()()
I am a fan of unusual MCs and man, this MC is highly unusual. Where's all the perfection we got used to in our MCs? None. The MC is like a random guy put into horrific situations. His reactions and his uncertainty are all amazing to read. Expecting a lot from this novel
Pointless story. You come for the monster mc and he is already human by chapter 5 xD it's a joke aha ...............................................