great novel , really good story , interesting themes and scenarios , the mc appears to have some intriguing abilities , i'm looking forward to seeing how quickly and how big his harem gets
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Author does an amazing job of building a world, it's like reading a fascinating history book of an unknown world. doesn't waste time giving you the meat and potatoes of information and sets the scene for the world immediately.
Well, this is a promising book and I would say keep up the good work.
I haven't actually read sci-fi on a complete balance, but this, is one good start.
well-done author, wish you well.
Hello.
Answer to chapter 5.
The power like summoning lightning and flying is impossible and I am sure that noone ever did it in our world. Due to fundamental laws of physics and biology, most likely obtaining something like that for biological system without additional organs and changing the structure of organism won't be possible in other worlds either.
About ancient martial arts. When I was younger, I was a direct disciple of leaders of federations of Taekwondo, Wushu, and Wing Chun in my country. (sadly I put physics above martial arts in my life, so after applying to university I stopped practicing and I do not practice anymore for few years, but I still know a lot about it).
There are 2 ways of martial arts: inner and outer (english is not my native language, so name maybe different)
Inner styles are closer to cultivation so I would explain what I know about it. The main point of inner style is do not train your muscles, basically less muscles - the better. You see, most practitioners use body as mechanical system, but actually it is semi-mechanical, semi-hydrodynamical system. So the idea of inner styles practitioners is to generate Centrifugal force inside there body and perform a hydraulic shock. The 1st level achieved by inner practitioner is ability to perform fa jing (you can google it), later levels are much more formidable but you most likely won't be able to find any info about it because training it without master may kill you, So in nutshell, after 20+ years of training inner practitioner can kill almost any human just by touching him. My master was able to push a 70 kg disciple, who touched his shoulder, without moving any muscle by 2 meters. It is like he is vibrating all the time. Also inner practitioners are generally keeping there strength until the moment they die because they do not use muscles so old age almost do not affect there power (thats why exist legends about 90 years old masters stronger than young warriors). Also it is possible for a master to 'control' his weight, but actually it is just vibrating and constant applying of force. It is an increase or decrease of mass, it is only a correct momentum. Also when martial arts were a real thing all martial artists had some medical knowledge and even now some traditions ask it for applying for better dan. My master of Wushu even was a practicing therapist in our local hospital. So as you may see they were able to use herbs and acupuncture for better recovery and boosting perfomance during battles. Natural drugs are quite strong actually, and can boost your speed and strength above limit of your body. (it is harmful, but trainied body can endure it once in a while)
I think you got an idea what were martial artists of ancient times. Real martial artists were truly strong and things like dodging arrows or moving unharmed through an army and killing general was a reality. And even ‘’magic powers’’ existed, thou it was only correct usage of herbs and explosives. (gunpowder was known even before 700 AD, but became used in wars only near 1400, so those 700+ years was the golden age for people with some knowledge in alchemy).
P.S. They are not hiding, they just know that purpose of martial arts is killing and we live in peaceful times where violence is prohibited. Going to war zone is a terrible idea either because explosion or bullets are much more effective then melee. Due to this reasons, basically only leaders of federations and there successors learn properly., Most disciples are not taught real arts actually. It happens because people refuse to invest years of there life to something that won't help them in future.
Have a nice life and do not think about useless things!
Here to counteract the fact that someone was childish enough to rate a novel purely because the title is similar to the title of another book. People, smh
I'm only 10 chapters in but as a German speaker I am so irritated by the German names that it ruins my experience.
Please take note that this is my first time composing a novel! It’s suggestable that there will be errors during some of the contents . I apologize if the novel is not to your liking or standards! >~<
If this VR game is actually connected to reality like other VR novels: 'I Became the Ultimate Boss', then It will be very interesting since that means MC will also become a god in reality (or at least can affect the real world). But if MC's godhood is only in VR then, meh... I am already bored with those pure VR genres where MC only shines inside VR.
Okay, this novel is good.
Why is that?
Warning: Tiny minora spoiler ahead. Read at your own risk.
Let me clarify something first in today's novels regarding this genre. Whether they are Japanese, Chinese, or original ones, they have cliches. The repeating happenings that it has becomes predictable and boring. So boring that reading the synopsis or the first chapter will make you lose interest.
This one, this novel is a fresh addition because it has new gaming aspects told in a storytelling that will bait people to voluntarily go to the deepest layer of 'the abyss', LOL.
Writing Quality:
Storytelling factors such as the dialogue and information given in between isn't lacking or excessive. The cliffhanger is really good especially that first chapter. As per the basic requirement every author must learn, "show, not tell", the author has mastered it. It is at the level you would end up engrossed reading the story.
The last thing is the fillers. Nope, there's almost no fillers or whatnot, atleast for me.
Stability Of Updates:
From what I observe, there's unstable updates for this one in the last couple months. But now author is uploading daily chapters. So do not worry fellow reapers.
Wow, two chapters per day? With 1500-200 average words? You're a beast man.
Story Development:
Now, this is what I like about it. Only second to world background. Not too slow and not too fast. The pacing is excellent and far better than any novel out there that get power-ups to one punch any obstacle in the way. If there would be future face slapping events then it will be different.
Overall, you wouldn't experience the ypical elements involving the gamers, people, the game master and monsters in the typical litrpg genre. Simpy because of the unique theme and setting where it all took places.
Character Design:
Fleshed out characters that certainly is an individual. Not some characters that simply follows the wil of their gods. Goals amd motivations, check. Personalities, flaws, addiction, and minor tidbits that makes them a person, check.
The main characters arnt't some godly geniuses that knows everything one way or another and will implement everything.
Tbh, I have so much to learn from the author,
Its slapstick comedy and it's not bad, but I can only take so much literal face slapping. Our MC builds his own virtual device and logs on to skynet. And as a result things are reversed for him.
love this novel!!! found it by accident and came to stay. please keep up the good work and give us a lot more updates for this secret masterpiece !!!!