Although the story starts on a tragic and hard to digest note, the true story starts on a very good note. MC is surrounded by a loving mother and sister, in a mansion full of beautiful women just ripe for the taking. The pace of the story is good, not too slow and not too rushed, new characters are constantly introduced, with new developments occurring every few chapters.The story is in the buildup stage, and it takes time for it to build, but it's worth the patience. Although there are points of improvement since it's the first work, it's a pleasant journey of healing surrounded by loving family and wives.
The book is worth it, the story has the potential I hope the story won't end soon. looking forward for more chapters, I'll never gonna drop this story and will read it till the end.
I really don't know why author make mc gave everything to the protagonist. I don't know if you want mc to throw all heroines to protagonist and want to give all opportunity to make him grow then your are the dumbess person in the world.
Great read so far confusing in some parts but overall definitely worth reading
Leo: How did he know my name? How can he be in two places at once? isn't this the after life? Why do I feel familiarity with this man? I have got to admit, he is handsome, no wonder he could claim such a beauty. But why his he talking to me now? All these questions kept racing through Leo's mind. Seeing the man move closer to him, he finally replied. I am sorry sir, i didn't mean to intrude.
The 1st to second, and maybe a little if the third volume is annoying to read, but once u get to the part where linley gets together with that one chick at the erwin institute, i can guarantee u, that it only gets better, so....much....BETER!!!Warning: there will be scenes that make u cry, i know i did..... a lot too.....Warning:same scenes will make u mad too, and some others as well....Ps: by that one chick, i mean the the first one, u know, the ine he doesnt actually know about, but is in a relationship with.... that one.Pss:him smashing the two crystals, that part will make u sad and angry..... also ****** the statue/sculpture, make u feels sad to.... but these feelings are what gets u hooked on this book, with more feels to come in the future.Also, i swear, this is the only book, where i myself became super f#cking p!ssed for the MC, anf cried and felt moody when bad things happened to him. I was also expectant of other chinese books too after i finished reading this, but those other books....could never even get close the the backsrory, plot, character developement, the excitement and worry for the MC, the relationships and betrayals, deceit and cunning, and SO MUCH MORE!!!???? that other books just cant compare to this one.I might be a little baised, since this is the first translatef book I've ever read, but it is really good starting the middle of 3rd volume, and it only goes uphill from there......though the end is so....anticlimactic.......its great though...Now then, if u have eniugh time to read to here, then..... GO READ THIS BOOK ALREADY, QUALITY GUARANTEED BY ME???
Well, I was truly taken aback. That is, the first chapter caught me off guard. That ex-boyfriend really said "Let's wrap things up". Yeah, let's kill your girlfriend on Valentine's day, you romantic bastard. I don't usually read novels with female protagonists but this is a good read. Although the Chinese names can really make things confusing while reading. That's just my personal opinion. Overall, it's a great story with a promising protagonist. Future readers, you should definitely give it a read.
Its alright, not my cup of tea though. Characters do not feel real and they are often idiotic. Somethings are illogical.
The story features seem quite interesting. The system points towards sci-fi while the other stuff can be fantasy.it's rare seeing a mix of the two, so that's neet
The story is fascinating and the fact that it is the author's first system story, the author did a pretty good and I enjoyed reading the book. Will be looking forward to more from you.
i loved the wording of the story. i loved the mix of suspense and romance. i had to wait til the end of the book to give a good review. this is a book to just kick jack anf have fun with.
Ugh. Mention of IQ in description is a dead giveaway of retarded story.How could author possibly write about someone with six times his IQ? It is not even parody. Dismissed.