it was soo amazing!! now i'm left wanting for more :(( I suddenly feel empty..well thank you author-san for your work and hope you keep us updated !!
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Nao sei se é so eu que vejo isso, mas quando eu to vendo um novel chinesa, tenho que a china é uma terra sem lei, e o autor não pode reclamar diretamente, se não ele vai ser preso e torturado.
Thank you for the update, loved the story development and character setting so far. And maybe in the future, the adeptus mechanicus will create the skiitari rangers, castelan robots, and skorpius disentigrator tanks to help fight against the arachnids' faction!!!!. I can also imagine the reactions from the terran federation towards the imperial guard and the adeptus mechanicus (tech-priests).
It is an amazing work, sure the author has made mistakes but that is part of being human and he fixed them and apologized, ignore the self-righteous salty whiners who act as if they haven't messed up before and continue to beat a dead horse. They only decided to complain in the reviews after it was put back up(after fixing the mistakes), showing signs of cancel culture which I am sure most people are sick of.
Continue.
Not that good. One of the worst ways I’v seen an author handle system/skills. MC is still a coward, timid, boy 130 chapters in. Things that should be considered skills in real life the author doesn’t consider them skills. MC still lives his life as if he doesn’t have a skill system. Has no proactivity in tryin to get more. All his skills have come unintentionally and every time he freezes in shock like he forgot he even had the system. On top of all that it’ a slow paced novel which makes the issues even more glaring. This was better off not being a system novel if this was the route he was gonna take with the MC.
So far as I’ve read it’s a good story but needs an editor because the quality of writing detracts from it.
The story is good .I love it .the mc is ruthless when comes to enemies and soft to love ones but he is not handsome as other mc's like in novels .
Pretty disappointing. There are quite a few glaringly obvious flaws with this novel.
First off, everything works out way to well for the mc. He gets saved by a really powerful group who realistically would not give a rats ass about him and gives him a cultivation technique suited for him (because he cannot learn other without meridians). He gets a super common technique for cultivations that everyone can get their hands on for themselves, all their cousins, AND their dogs and finds it is an incomplete technique that even in its first stages of unlocking is better than all other technique out there. All while not even 1 person in the hundreds, if not thousands, of years has thought maybe I should see how far this technique can go. And this only is in the first few chapters, it still just as bad, but uses that technique as a main reason for it working.
Secondly, the whole story is about how it is dangerous to be a wisp in a cultivation world because everyone want to use you for resources, but no out of 120 or so chapters there is only 2 times anyone has even considered using them as resources for cultivation. Every character you meet is either strictly good or strictly bad, and most of the time everyone is they meet are good people.
Another Douluo Dalu from TJSS. I've read 500 chaps in Wuxiaworld but it's great that Qidian is hosting this here too with is a higher rate of translation. And all the chapters are free!
Douluo Dalu 1 was a great read although it had lots of cliches. DD2 was fantastic, the author removed all the cliches and made the romance better. DD3 comes out of author's experience of writing the previous two and gives you a refined DD experience. The series didn't become stale at all even with a third release because TJSS evolved the DD world perfectly.
I can't give a final verdict on this because I haven't completed this yet. But so far I think this one deserves five stars. DD is the only CN martial arts series that didn't annoy me at all and I think it'll be the same for you.
Nothing but **** story is ****. Sorry its my opinion ''''''''''""""""''"'"""""''"'""'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''"'''''"'''''"''''''"''’'''''ज्ञ''''''''''''''