please don't add an ntr it's just fine as it is
The word for this book is 'beautiful', as it takes one on a magical carpet ride to a simpler time of innocence, where life was segmented into classes and everyone kept to their social status. It is a wonderful story in which the reader can effortless get immersed and lose themself in the beautiful story being narrated with a depth of clarity.
Short Title : BDC
Alternate Title : 大数据修仙
Status : Ongoing
Author : Chen Fengxiao
Genre :
Fantasy, Xianxia
Tags : Adventurers, Beautiful Female Lead, Cheats, Gate to Another World, Godly Powers, Hidden Abilities, Male Protagonist, Modern Day, Multiple Realms, Poor to Rich, Weak to Strong
Feng Jun, a double-degree graduate of 985, was unemployed after graduation. He struggled hard in the city, but he still couldn’t put down the shelf. His situation can be imagined.
Until one day, he and his phone were hacked by lightning, and suddenly found that he could turn into data and enter the app.
What can avatar data enter the app? There is so much you can do, imagine it … wait, deposit in mobile banking? Stop it, that can’t be changed!
Of course, this is not all, and then he also found that he can freely enter the Xianxia plane …
Let’s follow Feng Jun and embark on a wonderful journey of cultivating immortals. “The season of falling flowers meets the king again.”
I'm sorry to give such a low rating but the author doesn't know what to write.
I don't mean grammar, I'm not English and I can understand history very well.
He writes without thinking about future or previous chapters, he focuses only on the current story arc.
Take for example when the Lin family is kidnapped: The parents are weak and the protagonist has to bow, huh no, plot twist, they are actually much stronger than they show! This is revealed in the future, but then why did the father allow his family to be kidnapped?
But it doesn't matter, it's a bad thing but it didn't bring this to the drop, but the exact same thing happens shortly after (shortly after the parents reveal their power), even worse than in the beginning.
The protagonist does nothing when his mother and sister are taken away in front of him, despite the fact that the enemy has said he wants them both, making it clear what he wants the two women ...
I continued reading to find out the motivation, which marked the drop of the series:
"Oh no, because if you intervene, your father will have a block, it doesn't matter if your sister and your mother are violated." (The phrase is not quite like that, but the gist is this. We know that nothing will happen, since the author is not faithful to what he writes and invents things to create plot twists that break the plot).
This is why I dropped, but there are a lot of smaller errors, which don't make the story understand.
Like the conflict of the two souls within the protagonist, which was not transmitted at all. Conflict? Nothing ever happened between the two souls, it's just a stretch for the growth of the protagonist.
The relationships of the characters that come out of nowhere.
The fact that the protagonist loves animals (even when he was on earth, written as someone who defended and saved animals), and then makes them die only because they can be brought to life.
In short, there are many errors of writing (not English).
Besides this is an unoriginal story, I have never read astral pet shop or what it's called, so I don't judge the beginning. I just say that he does not quote but copies many things, such as the character of Momonga (not a quote), the tribulations of the sky / lightning, the examination of the tamers which is identical to two other stories (theory to a very famous one, and practical punching beasts to improve their strength, which you should have already read in another fairly famous story).
In short, I do not recommend the story.
The rating is not a precise star, a little more (1,8), since it has some nice chapters, but it is not enough for the two stars. I struggled to read up to chapter 300+, as I didn't want to drop until I figured things out, but that chapter is pretty awful.
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Yeah I gave a 5 star review because the book is worth it, so give it a trial. The author captivates you with her plot , her characters and the story line is fresh giving you something to read that hasn't been over produced
its liked reading teletubies in a novel. what i mean is, the novel wrote just base on around 2 metter radius bubble of the mc. What worse is that the story jump all over the places. The story doesnt has any goal whatsover, there no solid foundation in world building, the character are all there just create platform for the mc to perform,but then again our mc just THERE, he just doesnt has any reason to exist in that story really....its bassicaly slice of life but with power building story just so that he doesnt get killed. The story is really blurry, only the mc is slightly not,then again the mc still vague because the story is just all over the place. Ch 1 he brave the danger and survive, 5 chapter then the mc suddenly becoming a super inteligent and bravest knight there is. What he got after 3 years skip of training doesnt even got any explaination....is he sword user? is he magic user? how good he is with close combat? how good is he with intelectual thinking? the story just progress as if telling you, "Yo mate, this is the mc, he's talented and he is THE MC, after hes training for 3 year any problem that come hes way is solveble and he is THE MC, oh yeah and the scene where he is fighting, the close call scene, the intelectual connan scene, and the scheming unveil scene is just to make it more dramatic, he is THE MC so of course you dont need to know how good he is compare to other, he just there and any problem solve."
Lots of standard cliches, however the book is still very engaging and fun to read. I 100% recommend this book to anyone that has a love for magic.
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I hope they will regain their memories .
I hope and wish you update time will not killing me slowly T,T
Just like You other novel , they story and novel is great but male me lile to dropped cause the release date , pay to read is okey but if one month just 15 chptr it was my lose