I am curious as to how this story develops since the female lead transmigrated into a different body but in the same era and place (I mean it's not the same sect but I think maybe the same town?). Maybe the revenge will be easily obtained or maybe not. I don't know, it isn't like other novels where the leads are originally very weak and bullied by their own family or the society.
I originally reaf this story after buying the books on Amazon and it was such an amazing story that it helped me to become interested in the entire genre and start reading these stories. I cannot recommend this series strongly enough and hope that everyone who reads this story enjoys it as much as i did.
The character being dark skin made this novel trash no cap
Hello dear author, I'm very amazed the way you present this story. I'm very thrilled, excited don't know what to feel about it. I will follow all your updates from now on. Thanks
Hm why do Chinese authors like to right Their synapsis like some type of epic poem that tells the new reads nothing about the story other than it will be some type of epic tail to grandeur? In my opinion this is a very bad move being made by a good portion of Chinese author's. I don't know if this type synopsis works really well in China and thought surten parts of the East. But i am pretty sure it doesn't in the western part of the world and for most people who are natural born English speakers. Most people in the west won't understand these types synapse. So my advice to the people translating and editing these stories is if you notice the story your working on has one of these types of synapses would be To think about what the story's about write your own from what you understand of the story without reveling to much. For example it needs mention main characters name and little bit about his life like were does he live and is he an underdog and if so how. I will stop at saying one last thing because i am onistly just tired typing in trying explain why this is bad for you the translators. Because no matter how good the story might actually be if the synapsis suck it will fail to catch large portion of readers and will ultimately be beat out by stories not as good in the ratings but have more detailed synapsis.
This novel is on the same league as other paid novels with in-depth character, world and background development, if this gets more in to action hopefully, it will be awesome! i suggest give it ago for the next 5 chapters!
Very good story! If your unto apocalypse and kingdom building with having system to guide the MC you'll enjoy reading this novel. I can recommend you this one..
When I first started this novel I was like what is this, I even added it to my library without reading it, but when I couldn't get any update from nirvana I started this and am really enjoying this
I like how the story started, I'm expecting morekeep it up spag king
This is a good read. I'm a new author as well but I've only started writing a few chapters. I read your story to see if there were things I could improve on but I immediately got hooked on the first few chapters.
The story is very interesting. Just one chapter into your book and I'm already hooked. Another thing I also observed is that your writing quality is flawless. Will love to read more. Keep it up! ?
I made the 5 star review because i am confused with WN review system.1. So let's start with "democracy" that many people feared. No, the MC didn't just relinquished his power in the government like how the UK monarch and most constitutional monarchy did. (If some of you has some confusion with the definition constitutional monarchy, it's basically a monarchy based on the constitution. So you can write whatever the F you want in that constitution, and if the majority or every single one of the top brass of the country agrees, you can effectively become a dictator.) So in this story, what the MC wrote in the constitution is that he made himself the executive of the government, commander in chief of the armed forces, etc. Just imagine the power of any president that acts as their country executive branch with the difference of no election or terms since the MC is the king. He needs to abdicate or dead. The democracy exist only in the legislative branch.2. Next I saw a criticism that there is only 1 royal guard. If you read it carefully, the MC got tons of guards surrounding him. Of course they would only be mentioned in 1 phrase or sentence. The one guy that is always with him is the chief of royal guards, so he had the rights to be present wherever the MC is.3. Personal life of MC. Nothing special happened, the characters involved exist for the sake of existing, especially the love interest.4. The reformation in labour. I have seen many people criticized this part saying it's too radical and doesn't make any sense. Yes I do agree it's very radical considering the era of the story, however it's necessary to be done to appease the hungry and angry citizens. The thing that is a pity would be that there is not much explanation on the consequences of such radical reform. The author just glossed over it and make it seems like there is no fight from the capitalists. Similar thing happened when the MC reformed the regional government, changing it from viceroyalties to electoral positions like we know in most countries.5. How the MC run the government. The main thing of how the MC do his job is that he would do anything to ensure the safety of his empire, family, and citizens. He didn't really care about other countries and their citizens. It can be seen with the war against yamato arc or him sending 2 fighter jets with air to ground missiles to destroy stolen military vehicles in a village.6. Finally it would be grammar and writing in general. I don't have much to say in this since I don't have much knowledge in writing. So I have no complain on grammar. However on the writing side, I am confused with the title of the MC. In some part he was mentioned as "Emperor" and in some other parts it was "Tsar". Please make it consistent.Final score: 6.5-7.5/10