Great novel! My brain stoped when i started this but give the novel a try is a great work Thanks and keep the good work!
Excellent writing, and an interesting story to boot. The characters are unique, and the world is well defined up to this point. The pacing is also very good within it's genre. Definitely worth reading!
This novel is average at best, as far as i can tell the evolution aspect of this novel only shows up once in the 20 available trial chapters.
One of the well written novels I’ve read so far! I’m quite happy with the character progression as well! This novel has a lot of potential hopefully the author HG, will continue to release his work! Keep up the good work.
A very entertaining novel with a great story concept. It is a bit shaky when introducing the MC starting point in the beginning chapters however it becomes addictive as you progress in chapters. The style is quite similar to 'The city of Terror'. It is a highly recoomendable read.
soo hard to read.. it's all over the place.. concepts aren't really clear.. MC suddenly gets a sniper rifle and it's not clear how he got it.. some people are saying in comments that he went abroad n used his personal space to get it.. but there's no mention of it at all..One guy is killed in the game n when he's out he's driving his car all of a sudden.. and he immediately re-enters the game still driving.. how did he end up driving the car when he was in the game? or does the car detect he's in a game n drives itself? nothing mentioned.. there's no time stop or something n user has to wear a vr helmet to play n all.. there's other stuff like mc walks into a gym to test this strength.. coach seeing his form is wrong corrects it.. seeing MC is strong he immediately asks if he wants to become a coach.. even though all he got is strength.. MC rejects it.. n that's it.. nothing else.. only reason I can imagine why the author wrote those 3-4 paras is to make fun of other novels where MC does join a gym which is kinda stupid..Real world is even more ambiguous.. MC enters the game at night n is out by morning.. what does he do during the daytime? go to work? go to college? nothing.. he eats meat from the game.. exercises.. re enters the game.. all I can get from this is that MC takes an entire day to eat n go for a run..MC goes to his village all of a sudden to defeat his friend/neighbour as he became stronger.. then that friend guards his house when MC is playing the game.. nothing else..Basically everything is all over the place.. written very poorly.. n half done.. upon that translation is really bad making it even harder to read.. overall it's simply unpleasant to read.. a complete waste of time
is these novel drop by author ??it is a great novel though please ? continue update
It's a good story and has great worldbuilding in terms of the fact the mc doesn't forget about the real world and it's still a thing unlike a lot of novels similar to this one where they go in the game and it's pretty much as if the game is now reality and the NPCs have an actual reason for being human like so overall very good worldbuilding and character design those are the highlights in my opinion.
Although there are only 7 chapters so far, it definitely has ALOT of potential, Grammar is simple, and the story itself seems extremely interesting, I truly hope the author doesn't drop this one, there have been alot of diamond ore's that havent been able become diamonds recently because the authors keep dropping the books early, so author, I am compelling you to keep writing this wonderful story
This novel is good, too bad the pinyan makes reading this worse than getting an STD, seriously say "junior apprentice brother" like every other freaking translator, i can barely understand who they're talking about half the time due to the terrible pinyam.
Pre-industrial metallurgy requires mining, coal and blacksmiths. The author who puts the blacksmith without explaining the first two is lazy. Malignant sects may have slaves digging in mines, and cutting forests to make coal, but if all the material comes from slave labor the other sects are conniving and the government supports it. If members of the external court perform this service on a seasonal basis, there are periods of the year that no one obtains these resources. See? In five minutes the author could have a history of conflict between the good and bad sects all involving a blacksmith with a system, the difficult life of an outside sect member and slaves from the evil sect.
I didn't read this story but almost every story of EndlessFantasy Translation is good and i like them, so i vote for this story. Endless Fantasy updates are stable, good translation quality and story is interesting.