Updated review now that the book has gone premium. The book has stuck to its good points and the updates have been daily without fail. More of the world is being introduced and the characters are becoming more solid.
Is this novel based on a manhwa if so what is the name of the manhwa
started reading it,let's see how far her revenge goes.
Alice is an amazing character and so are Lilia, Alyssa and Ria.
Hi, I'm loving your book - it's a true gem! Are you planning to release an updated edition or explore new ways to share your work with even more readers
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I'd like how you utilize your words to express explosive thoughts. Good job! Also, it's well written not too fast and not too slow. Keep up the good work! Your book is a masterpiece!
First thing first.. Give you a 5* rating cos I really enjoy this novel.. Pros : Story is Good.. Has lot of potential. Mc cheat and path to power seems interesting and it got me hooked right from the beginning.. Good job author. Pros : * sigh * Even though I got so hooked up n immersed in the story I can't help but feel irritated by the simple mistakes?? Of the translator or the Author. For f sake.. Please.. Even if ur not that good in grammar at least write the spellings right.. Too many wrong spellings n misplaced words.. To point out a few.. Every time we saw Mc status update we see "Mentle" power that should be "Mental" power * Hmmm * Pls at least fix this.. The spellings n grammar mistakes are an eyesore for this unpolished Novel that has a lot of potential to rise up.. Pls fix.. Asap.** : M rooting for you Author to make this story better than it already is..'
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
i've read the raws for this a long time ago it has like 500 something chapters a lot of people felt like it was incomplete towards the end. idk if its a haitus or the author completed it in a rush or something . Regardless the story is great Mc is not the only one with system. 2 more people get systems one gets the all knowing (omnipotent) system, the other gets the supreme life body system. i'll give 3 stars cos unique storyline but the rushed or rather somewhat off ending ruined it for me.
No, I can only give 5 to your novel. If the rating is 100, I will give it to you without hesitation. We will just wait for the end. I am very excited. I want to meet you until you give me your signature.
Hi! This is doris, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.