So first of beware that this novel isn't too serious a novel. So if that is what you're looking for I would reccomend you to look for something else. Now that we are past that the writing is of good quality besides a few typos here and there I can't seem to find much errors in it. The mc's character isn't all too deep, but I feel the author is trying his best and besides it is hard to make a deep and relatable mc in novels like this. World seems interesting with stones that allow for people to reincarnate and how the tribulations are decided be a bunch of scummy immortals. Updates are pretty stable and good in amount, the only time there where no updates was when the author was moving out so props for that. Yeah I guess that's about it all in all its worth a shot.
The Story feels strangely rushed and the explanations are lacking/missing. Can people habe more than one Skill? How about him?Only figured out "Godspeed Step" is not a movement technique after like 2 chapters as well wtf...
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I really love this whole novel I like whole story
i could point out a bunch of thinks like how others said, there's bot really a proper description, or how I'm annoyed at like how the mc is being dumb (my own opinion) but still I still like it
This book is doing rAther well and i am totally loOking forward to more. character development is in its way along With some romance and the begining of The MCs career. i like how hes not entirely reliebt on his system but wOuld enjoy seeing more development with that too. yay and best wishes! ♥️♥️♥️♥️
This is by far One of the best if not the best Harry Potter fan fiction I've read, all I ask of you is to not drop it... But if you do have a solid reason to do so I won't/can't blame you... Pls keep this personality of his it is very different in all the others that I have read and the one where Harry is in Slytherin is fairly rare so I give my support to you!!! (even though it may not mean much)
the story is about zombie that was coming after a month but the author ****ed up and created the so called mutant animal before the zombie arrives and there's even a fucking level 3 mutant animal in the start even though the zombie is still not coming, and considering the strongest zombie is level 9 in his past life that level 3 should only appear in the middle but the author is an idiot well dropped this trash also the author keep adding female so the mc can **** them
From what we know I hate cooking things with you guys. But I think sharing a Google doc is the best one for you. Adventure time is your flight to the top of the world. Hay day to you!
The game is so broken that his skills at the start is so OP. Especially he has a cheat everything will be so broken already even if he's just a beginner.
Just thought you desereved a quick review, this book has a well thoughtout story which captivates. it causes you to need to continue reading like an addiction :) Anyways really recommend !!! Keep up the good work
Extremely high standard grammar for a novel on Qidian.And don't take those words lightly.When I was reading the first chapter, what my mind noticed was how smooth I could read the novel even more than the story at that point.THEN I noticed the story. The author obviously has a plan for this. I even went to deviantart to get a closer look at the map.If this clues anything, it's that you can expect a well thought out, grammatically good story with expansive world-building in the future.Even considering the small plot holes, JUST the readability of this novel gives it a five stars. Keep writing my man, and keep doing it for a long time :D