Story is good, i admit and I am still very interested in it but in later chapters, the story is getting stretched, even more then chewing gum, in best novels i read the MC and his/her team already rescued there family and already started building there fortress, made alliance, and here he is still on searching resources. Please change that.
highly disappointing even after 150 he still does not have a class and events happen so fast.
Well, this is rather interesting. good quality in writing, and a good plot. I liked the pacing of the story. It was not toooo long drawn, neither too quick, and still pulled me in to read. Overall gr8 novel
I love this book. It's so interesting which makes me continue to read. I'm done with the chapters. Still need more author.
I read it In a app called fizzo. It has contain of over 1000+ chapters. Recently the app is updated and change the language from English into different language and the story is under revision. It's a pity that the author is stop posting any chapters or maybe he can't post anymore because of the new feature of the app. This story was the most exciting novel I ever read. Maybe in the first face of the story it's kinda boring and you may find it look like the other novel story but it is not. I'm read it over 1000+ chapter and it will bring you into different world
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it is good
Maybe this is the first novel that I liked on the web novel and planned to read till the end, as it is well-written ma'am. Alas~ you've uploaded only one chapter but desperately waiting for more, the way you describe the characters was enthralling, definitely gonna add it to my library. ?
this story is for masochist, if you like mc abused by other people then this is story for you! event the first 18+ mc is r@ped by man. .
So far so good! Actually system' novel is not really my thing. But the author make it easy to follow and understand. I really enjoy ur writing and already read all the published chapter (Chp 14). Can't waiting for read more.
Well The Writing Quality Is Good, There Is Room For Story Development.Author can Try To liven Up Characters By Emphasizing More On Emotional Aspect as well as their featured.The Most Promising Thing, Is World Background. Which Author Can Further Improvised To Inter-Galatic Wars or more As Author may see fit, As There will be different species in future author can I have our MC s*x With Inter-species.Well Author May Need To First As Public Opinion As There May Not Be Many People Who are Interested In Such Kinky Stuff...Well Last But Not Least It Has Room For Growth But The Book Has Not Been Updated For Probably 5 Months So I Gave 1 Star If Possible I won't give a starI ain't Stingy, But Yeah If You Dropped This Please Mentioned It So Others May Not Get Their Hopes Irked Upon This Story .I Will Change This Review After Author Has Upoladed Enough Chapters For Further Assessment Thank You ❤️
bem, eu particularmente gostei do livro, entretanto, tem tantos capítulos de vários personagens diferentes. isso é interessante para a construção do mundo, no entanto, fico me perguntando a relevância de certos capítulos...bem, tirando isso, a história é boa, meio devagar mas boa.