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Thank you for translating two of my favourite sports novels. The translation was surprisingly easy to read even though it was MTL'd. Might be because it was from korean instead of chinese but idk

Years ago I like to read this modern type chinese MC like IRAS and others, but now I usually stay away from modern chinese novel genre, most of them have heavy nationalism at certain point of story. I fed up with that so I usually read alternate earth or just less to no nationalism stories.

T͐̒͑̉ͮ͊̈ͯͩ̇͂̉͆҉͓̦̼̭ǫ̸̯̟̲̠̬̖͍̲͉͔̏̏̾̐ͧͤ̿ͩͩ̑̓̐͗̏ͦ̒̅ ̛̲̟̤̙̩͖̠̠̜̮͍̖͉͑ͮͭ͌ͥ̉̓̍̀ͅi̸̡̧̡̛̺͕͉̞̝̬̙͚ͯͪ̿ͣ̀̄͗ͮͩͅṇ͈̱̩͈̗̝̻̮̪͔͍̳̥͕̠̞ͧ̽̏̿̌ͧ̃̆ͬ͡v̸̢̺̪̗̣̗̭̘̺̬͈̬̳͕͖̳̣͙̰̀̅̏ͭ̀̽͐̅̿ͪ̑̄̿̈́̒̽̅͐̀͘͜o̶̴̷̢̪̰̩̱͔͇̤̫̘̱ͬ̀̎̅̎́ͤ̉͛̍̊̉̈̽̈̕k̛̍͆ͬ̉͛ͥ͛͛ͧ̈́̓͋͒̽ͪ̏́҉̗͔̻̠͍͚̞̫͡é̟̘̼̪̦̜̪̗̌͋̈ͬ͆̑ͯ̓́͟ ̶̢ͥ̈͐͆̿̾̐͆̾̌͑͗͐҉̶̝̟̝̟̖͓̺͍͕̬̰̦͢t̢̯̳̩̤͎̟͕̮̳̯̗̺ͤ̍͛̈͑̀̓͂̊̂ͪ͛̅̀̏ͮͥ̀̚̕͝͞h͗̊̆ͫͭ̀̆̍̄͂̓́̒͆̉̿̊̔҉̹̱̥̠̘̙̖̜̼̖͉̞̦̥̣̜̗̦͎̕͟é̢̓ͤ̽͏̦̗̣̖̩̣͉̫͝ ̸̭̖̰͕̥̜͉͈̲͉̾̎ͮ̒͆́̚͘͠h̸̛̜̤̤͙̩̱̙͋̇̏̔̿̃̄ͮ͗̔i̊ͫͥͤ́́͏̥̜̙͉̪̗̖̮̰͔̀v̷̥̯̙͓ͩͧͥͨͮ͆̏͒̽͗̚ͅe̛̤̼͚͔͈̰̘̰͇ͫ̍ͦͭ̔̑ͯ̂̆ͧ́-̶̡́͛̃ͫ̈́ͭ̅̅͑ͩ̌̾̌͐҉̵͈̳̭̜̭͙̮̪̥͖̪̟͓̣̹̩̞̤m̛̪̤̤̭̹̜̙͙̫̂ͬ͒̏̎͐͐ͫͭ̓̀ͫ͐̽̆̓̚̚ḯ̴̢̦̻̼̝͉͚͍̥̜̘̬̜͇̊͐͒͗̆̃͛͋̃͌͌͋̚̚̕ṅ̵̨̥̩̳̦̜̺͓̝̤͚̯͒ͪ͂̓͗̾ͬͭ̋̈ͪ̆̀͞ͅḑ̶̔̊̏̿͗͊̍̈̋ͥ̍̀̈̚̚͏̲̺̙͇̩̰͔̯ ̔̈̓̑̑͊͒ͯ̎͢͏̪̝̖̮̦ͅr̵̴͉͓̞̼̙͖̤̺̺͍̗̙͙̣̟̼̦͐ͦͨ͋̑̔̀ͩ̓̓ͤ̓̒̌̓͋͊̚͢͡ͅe̴̠̰̣̥̻̣̻͈̺̦͚̰ͧͥ͗͆̅̏͛͟ͅp̷͓͍̟̤̘̞̯̞̬̞͕͚͍̥̞̘̌͊̂͑̏̆̅ͨ̃́́r̶̨̢̩̭̯̭͙͚̺̖͓̣̮̱̽ͤ̈ͪ̂͊̎̎͋͜e̷̶̛̫͉̱̠͙̎̓̉͌̕̕s̴̷͖̰̼̫̺̹̰͙̖̍ͪ̃͛ͨ̊̉̂ͦ͋̐̀́͢eͥ̆ͮ̅̎̇́̽̀̏̑̓̎͛҉̶̗̰̭͔͔̪͓͍͎͔̖̩̼̮̟̟ñ̛̿ͥ̉̇ͮ͋̎͋̑ͭ͊͋̿̚͠͏҉͚̯̰͖̺̳̮̟̦͖t͈̥̦̣̠̩̘͕̝͔̳̝̰̺̝̋̊ͣ̎ͫ̓ͬͪ͑̕͠i̸̡̠͚̫͈̣͈̫͚͉̱͓̳̞̻̯̪̹̥̭ͧͥ̓̃͑͋̊̽̃͜͠͡n̆̇ͨ̇ͪ͑̍̆̈́ͤ̀͝҉̞͇̞͓͙̟̫̻̹͇̬͉̭g̛̳̣̠̼̦̘͈̘̣͎͒ͥͣ̍̒ͣ͑̆̀̚͞͠ ̛̺̲̹͎͙̼̹͇̅̃̏͗̉ͯ̾̈́̌ͨͦ̓͂͑̀c͛́̃̋͐̓̌͆͑̎̈́͋̄͛̍̓̓͗͏̞̦̪͍͍̖̠̲̯͈̪̳̲͚͕̻̕͡ͅh̸̞̮͚͔͍͈̩̦͎̪̦͔̗̼̒̑̀͒ͮͭ̀̂ͨ͗ͯ͢͡ạ̹̘̪͔͖͕͉̫͇͈̑̈ͭ̇͐ͪ̈́̉͋̑̐ͪ́͡o̧̡̯̺̘͉̬̞̭̘̭̻̬͕̱ͨͯ̂̆̔s̳̲͈̼̺ͦͣͣ̅͐ͦ̌ͦ̀̿͞͞͞.̵̢̘͚̥̱̙͇͚̥̫͚̮͕̲ͫ͋̎ͪͧͥ̍ͯ̏͊ͨ̒̌͗̾̂̚͡
̗̩͔̪͚̞̲͕̱̟͚̥̅ͪͥ̃ͤ̓̅ͣ͐̿ͩ̎́̕ͅͅĬ̷̧̨͈̠̪̭͓̭̹̗̯̥̮͇̣͋̈ͧ̄ͭ̃̈́͒̊̓̓̎ͣ̋̂̚n̴̲̤̪ͭ̐̓̃̒̇̃̂̽̐ͧ̀͢͞v̧͎̘͖̺͕͕͙͎͇̺̝̞͓͓̮̼̀̈́̃̊ͯ̑ͬ̊̔́̾̿͜͞ͅö́̑͗̒ͯ͏̧͍̹̠̝̥̼̯̳͍̠͕̙̻̥̀ḵ̶̡̛̯̲̭͇̰̜̫̲̔̏̓̒̃̀͑͜͝i̵̷͙̘̳͓̩͈̬͗̈ͦͫͩ̅́̅̓́͊ͬͭͫ̓ͣ̒͜͜͞n̴̴̡̛̲͉̥̥̥̹͕̣͒͌ͯ̇ͩ̆̃̃́̋̄ͯ̊̐͆ͦͅg̴̨̢̛̭̗̞͍̀̅̎̀͊͛̄̎͒̾̀ ̴̦͔̯̦̣͙̘ͣ̔͒̾̍̎̒̑ͭ̔́͛ͪ̇̍͐̓̾̒t̢̧̻̞͖̬͖͋ͨ̏̈́̏̀͒͗̑̚͠ͅḩ̺̥̰͖̼͔̖͙ͭ̐̍ͪͭͮ̌̒͒̉́̎ͪ͝ͅę͈̠̥͚̱͎̗̫͕͙̱͙̱̙̞ͤͬ̆́͂͐̐ͥ̄̀͝ͅ ̡̰̭͍̲̰̤̟̜̆͒̀͑̎ͥͨͦ̓̃ͧ̋ͬ̉̽̌̚͢͞f̷̡͎̩̠̼̫̰͎͚̯̯̲̝̬̝̮͍̹̬̑̑͊͗̿͋̓̾̌͢e̡̮̪̹͎̟̮̰̰͇̮̖̐͂̋̎ͧ̋̓̍̊͊͆͊̈̚͟e̹̰̪̜͍̗̖̻͓̪̪͔̰̱̞̿ͭ̆͘l̡͍̭̮͙͓̖͕͖̗̭̀͌̾̌̍̍̃ͯ̎ͪͫ̕i̧̢̞̬̼̟̠͙̗̦̖̙̻͎̤ͬ̂͐͐̈̽ͪ̈ͦ̿ͭͦ͒ͮ̄͡͠n̉ͧ̽̑̀҉̹̯̹̞͚̺̦̹͉̣͓̱͠ͅͅg̴̫͈̟͇͚̲̊̿ͮ͛̏̄͗ͣ̃̎ͫͦ̚͞͝͠ͅ ̸̹̠̗͕̼̜͈̗͓̗̣̬͔͍̘̝̈͛̔̔ͤͭͫͥ̇̐̄͆ͨ̅̈ͦ̐̑̃͞o̧̖͙̗͔̹̥̣̥̼̠̠̺͖̞̔ͣ͛̒̇̾͂̆̇̑ͦ̏́͒̒͑͑͟f͕̺̬͇̲̙͓͇̯̝͍͇̻͙̱̱̄̊͆ͭ̾ͮ̐͟͞͡͞ ̶̷̖͖̖̳̤̜̘̘̘͎̭͔͓͔͎͇͚̝̊̊̽͒̅̈́̇̽͆̿ͯͨ͌͢c̡̧̿̓̒̒͆͊́͜͏͚̤͙̙̦̦̳͕̙̲͎͙h̴̯̦̖̻̱̲͈ͯ̿ͫ̾̌͢͜ͅa̸͈̲̱͓̫̜ͫ͊͋ͩ̊ͧ͆ͣͥ́̾͌͟ò͌́̓̌͑ͥ̄ͮ͐́͜҉̸̴͕͕͖̜̙̩s̨̐́ͧ͋̕͞҉̜͙̲͎̘̦͓̯͍̬͔̀ͅ.̎͒ͯͫ̅҉͔̣̗͙͕̙͙̤̼̟̲̙ͅ
̧͚̞͇̫̺̘̱̰̬̳͖̱̝̥̇̂̽́͊ͪ̀ͦ͑ͥ̂́͘W͗ͣͭͦͭ̐̌ͥͩͩ̂̄ͪͬ͏̳̹̟̥̯̥̥̰̦͓̬̠̙̟͙̙̞̕͡i̸̛̭̻̳̳͎̍ͨͤ͒͑̀̃̎͞ṭ̸̥̟͈̯̙͍̻͇̮͎̪̱͙̗̈ͨ͆ͦ͝ͅḫ̷̶̭̝̪̱͇̬̠̫̣̲̋̊ͯ̈́͗̾ͫ̐ͩ̿̑ͧ͊̏̽͂͢͞ͅ ͕̼̜̼̼̜͕̝̞̭̳͇̯̹̣͕͔̏ͫͮ̅͐ͦ̄̌̓̀ͨ̄ͮ̽͡͡o̧ͯͮ͑̓̃͛̍̆̋̀ͣͬ̑ͩ̄̅̌ͭ̚͝҉̯̠̳͙͇̟̲̯͓͓̰̩͔̙̻̙̟ͅu̢̞̩̯̲̞͎̻͉͇͔̻͉̿̃̽͑͆̓̊̓̉͂̑ͮ̽́̍͗͟ţ̸̵̦͎̝̙͎̣̯̖̮̺͈̜̦͇͎̝͐̈ͬ̏͆͒̿ͯ̆ͭ̈́ͥͧͪ̈́ͯ̄͘͞ ̷̼̞͙̤̬̲̳͓͛͆͐̂̾̄̈́̀̆̀̏ͬ͊̑͊̔̋̚͟ǫ̷̒̈́͐̔̿͆ͦ̊̔̂́҉̨̛͉͎͈͇̫r̴ͮ͗ͮ͐ͮ̓͛͂̌̓̋ͨ̃ͬ͌́̂̚͏̸̢͈̘͇͚̻͎̳̗̝̝͕̖̖̥͕̻̖̥͓d͉̰̻̱̩̼͔̖̰͔̮̜̣̫̐̃̾̚͞ͅe̢̪̼͚͓̤̺͈͓̖̰͊ͬ̉ͣ͂͐ͭ̏̽ͬ͒ͧͣ̍̏͐ͮͦ̀͢͠͝r̡̛̥̖͙̻̪̪̼̭̳͉̳͎̯̀̿̍̏ͦ̌ͤ̆͠͝.̋͛̋̍͂ͪ̿̾͏̶̼̙̣̗̦͎̘̤͕̰̖͎̲̘̣̳̫͖́̕
̠̠̳̳̤̼̭̝͙͚͙͍͕̜̺̘͙ͬ̎̄ͧ̊͂ͥ̎̚͡T̡̘̖̯͇͔̪̬͕͈͙͎̥̬ͦͬ́ͦ͒͆ͪ̃́̕͟͜h̷̷̰̫̜̹̤͎̬̠̰̻̓̎̏̓͗̀͑̌ͥ̅̒ͩ̾̈̑̿̂̑͘͟e͗͑̆̋̾͡͝͠͞҉̦̱̲̻̪͔̳̗͍̝̩̳̫̥̱ ̷̧̗̣̤̖̮̬̠͇̳̼̣͍̮͈̞ͪ̌ͤ̒ͬͬ̿ͮͦͬ̿̎͋͗ͣ͒ͩ̒͘ͅN̨͖̖̠͔͖̫͇̹̳̜ͥ͐̐̐̂̊͑̅͛ͭ̃̾̽ͧ̃ͪ̃̉͊͢͢͞ě͇͔̬̝͑͗̀͠ẑ̖͈̪̤͕͍̙͕̻͙̻̩̫̮͇̠̹̩̒̇ͬ̓ͣ̾̄̽́̕ͅp̧̨̻̯̥̱̹̬̞͍̫̜̼̖̜͔̆͗̊͛̌̆ͥ͞ę̵̴͇̫̞̫͇̺̬̑̋̄̑͆̈͌ͯ̌ͦ̑̐̎͐͋̅͘͞ͅͅr̡̻̫̖͓͈͔̗͔͚̥̤͊ͬͥ̾͗ͨ̃̒ͦͥ͋̅͊̇͗ͨ̈̀ͮd͛̒̈̿̂̑̆͆̋̈ͭͭ̈̽̉̉̈͝͏̜͙͓̱͚̥̹̥ͅi̧͉͉̲͕͔͇̳̟͓͔̠̮͎̜̺̹ͭ̈̋̍́a̵̛͍͇̖̫̩̙͍̼̫̮̩ͥ̅̆ͣ̽̒̎͊͊̅̌͛̊̋͑ͨ̃̓͘͟͟n̵̴̡̻̗̳̭̒̃̌ͦ̔̎͒͒͌ͪ̿ͣ̽̋͌ ̥͖̯̖̲͕̣̺̳͖̼̻͎̯ͥͪͭ͂̍̇́ͭ̉̔ͪ̓ͥͩ̑ͭͣ͘͡ͅȟ̺̲̻͇̭̪̎͗͐͌ͪ͗̃̆̄͗̿̅ͫ̎̀͜i͂͊̄͐ͯ̀҉̭̬̝̥̭͕͟v̘̼̘̘̖̭̤͇̮͉̥͖͇͚̟ͦ̂̈́̃̐ͬ̑ͥ̒̏̉͘͡e͖̱̰̹̼͓͖͔͚͈̟̩͖̳̠̾̉̂̿͒͊̍̿ͯ͐ͮ̇̿̂ͬͣ̚͝-̛̪̘̭̤͖̟̱͕̰͈̻͕̘͍̑ͨͤͫͫ͊͒ͤ̐̏͘͜͞m̴̢̡͓͉̯̠ͫ̐́̔ͤ̀ͧͣ̃ͫ̔͑̓ͣ̕͠iͥͮ̊͆̓͏̪̞͎̝̲͍̫̼̹͎͕̀͘n̈͂̿́̀̉͠͏̡҉̹͍͙̲̖̥̝̫͍̕ͅd̡̥͇̰͔͚̺̺̹̼̪̘̹̣̩̰̜̜͓̽͊̉̆̄ͭ̆͠ ̴̢̱̣̪̘͍̞̱̣̰͎̩̰͙͚̹̤ͣͭ͒͗͋̏́̋ͦ̉͑̍ͅͅo̧ͩ͗̓̓ͮ́͡҉̲̰͉̮̻̜͙͘ͅf̛̬̖̳̫̯̺̘̪͍̱̭̮ͧ̾̂̾͋̚̚͘͟ ̓ͩ͒ͨͭ͒̃̅͐̏҉̢̝͚̣̪̠͖̗̟̬̳͖̭̖̩͓͍͍̗̪͘͡c̶̴̡̰̯̖̺̤͕̰̱͚͍ͣ̉̏ͤ͑͌̐̓̍͋͆̎h̵̖̱̖̦͈͇̯̗̼͖̪̖͗̒̿̀ͪ̓̾ͮ̀̀͟͜ͅͅa̗̣̮̪̲̘͒̓͒͑͘͘͟͞ȍ̴̡̫̠̳̲̥ͦͫͩ̄ͯͧͫ͗̄̽ͯ͌͆̐̄ͥ͜͢͟s̶͕̤͍̄ͭͭͯ́ͨ̆̇̾̕͜͠͝ͅ.̴̡̗͎̩̼̥̰̪̯̺̞̬̞̳̰̠̟͂́̈́̆̉̆̀̐̅͑͑ͧͨ̐̾͒̕ ̶̡͚̼͉̝̘͈̜̖̠͇̏̎ͣ̎̓̎ͦ͐͊̏̿̐ͧ̊̚͞͞Z̵̴̙͍̻̑̾͋̎͋̒͊̐ͧ̎ͧ̃̀ȃ̴͕̬̗͚̫̖͚̻̣̣̩͈̤̥͂͗̋́̽ͨ̍͂͑̑ͥ̐ͥ̒̒͒̚̚l̵̻̭̫̫̜͈̪̺̲̫͖̝͍͈͖͓ͫ͋ͮ͂͠͠ͅg̡̽ͤ̆̌̄̅̋͒̈̃̅ͩ͜͏̵͎̖̹̥̟̟̗ơ̡̬̪̥̜͍͈̰̦̳̰̰̹̲̒ͥ̽ͯͨ̽ͨ͞.̶̢͇͙̼͉̻̫̗̳̠̯͚̺̰͉̞̠̻̃̒̎̓̌͋̃ͬ͛͒̂̑̊̏ͬͩ̕̕
̢͉̱̣̤̻̞̾͋̌̓̒ͦ̈Hͤ̊̾̅͛̾ͤ̉̿̐ͧͭ̿̕͞҉̳͇̩͙͎̣̦̳̼͍͍̗̪̱͚͙̗͘ͅe͎͇͍̰̣͙̰̖͇͙̮̺͖̙̓͑̈̇͌́ͬ̇ͯ̍ͫ̈̇̚͘ ̺̹͕̞͖̗̦̼̻͙͇ͭ̍̐̃͗̆̒̋ͫͨ̀̊ͯ̑̍͊̚͢w̨̤̺̭̠̥̮͚̤̭̭͈͍͙̱͈͙͍̎͌͌̓̕͞͠h̸̶̪̤͚̙͙̻͙͇̯̫͖̰̮̩̓͒͐̎ͧ̈͒ͭ̌͒͆́͢͢ͅo̢̾̾ͧ̍̿̈́͐̾͋̿́ͥ͏͏͎̞̟̠̙͖̭͔ ̓̒͋̊͐͐ͬͬͮ̅͏̩̰̠̫͇̹̀͟͞W̊̂̑̐̇ͥͮ͜͏̵̘͕̻̗͉̳̲̝̤͚̻̮a̼̣̪̟͇̰̫̖̠͎ͯͩ͊ͭ͘͡ͅĭͮͯͥͨͮ̄ͯ̅̀ͥ̽̆ͧ͡҉̺̦̖̖̤̫̤͓̟̰̝̥̱̝̠̗͓̘͞ṭ̶̞̳̮̲̞̣̆̒̑ͮͯ͋ͥͣ͌̑̾̈̈̄͂̏̚s͎͎̺͓͔̪͉̙̳̠̰̘͊ͪ̐ͧ͋̊̆ͧ͂́͟͜͞ ̴̛̛̼͎̮̠̟̣̪̪͌ͩ̎ͯͦ̔̄̈̀̆̓͘B̵̧̡̮͚̱̺͈̠͔̌̓ͧ̂͌̓̽͗͒͋̓́ͪ͆̓ͭ̚͠͞ȩ̇̆͋ͩͨ͆̄͢͜͡҉̰̥̹͈̭̠͖̬̤̺̖͔̠̘̱h̶̖͈̥̯̩̜̤͈̞̭̰̮̳͕̍̎̊͋̅̈͛̋ͥ̀ͅį̩̦͚̯͎̐̓ͥ̾̄̊̌ͬ͢͟͟͡ṉ͖̞͉̺̮̤̺̝̥͂̈̋͊ͩ̆̋ͦͦ̆͂̒́́ḑ̵̺͔̦̥̫̻̦͎̘͇̝̫͚̦̭ͥ́̋̆̊͑̑̆̒ͮ̉ͣ͆̽̊ͫ͞ ̤̹̖̖̌̾̏̓ͣ̔̎ͣͯ͂͂̇̿̀ͩ̾͋̓͜͟͝ͅT̸̷̪̜͇̗͕̮̘̞̩̞̭̩͇̟͍͓̋̔͑̎̄̉̽̍͗̂͆ͪ̒͟͡ḩ̶̘͉̥̣ͫ̈ͣ̇̆̅̿̈ͮ̍͆̆̅̍̑͂́̚͜͡e̽̎̌̈́̌͐́̓͂̐ͯ̇͋̽̈́̆͆̉̓̀͏̰̥̰̭͓̻̲̗̝̥͔̹̯̼͇̫̟̣ͅ ̵̸̼̣͍͕̣̻͂̿ͪ̓ͭ̍̊ͪ͆ͥ͐̐́͝͠W̙̼̪͈̳̜̲͉̳̤͔̘͈̩͕̑͑ͮ̄ͦ̀͜à̴̰͍͚̭̭͕̙̱͇͕̦͕̭̳̠̞̥̺̽͒̽̅͒͗͛̈͊͜l̴̲̬͍̹͖͖ͤͮ̔̿̔͊̓̔̑͂ͪ̃̀̾ͤ͜ͅlͧͧ͆̽ͪͬ͛̅͏̵̼̗̜̹͓̥͝͠.̶̰͚͇͈͊͌͒̔́̀͌̉ͬͫ̈͌ͦ͋̔̅̑́̀̚̚͝
̡̛ͥͧ̽ͪͪͮ͋̑͗̾̄̍̈̎͐̅̚͢͏̱̪̞͖̮͉͎̙Z̸̴̢͓̙̫̬͖͍͖͇ͨ̾ͬ̇̐̄͂͠A̛̫̭̼̥͚̤͖͓̟̜̯͇̅̌̂ͯ̽ͧͭ͆ͮͣͫ͛̈̚͟͠L̶̡̃̓ͤ͂̐̑̈̏̈́͛͒ͯ͑̽ͤ̎̚҉̜͇̠̳͔͉̖̱͚̬͙̹̠ͅͅͅG̦̩̝̙͇͚̝̼̹͎͔͍̻̫͍̑͒̌̒͒̐͊͌́̚͡O̷̴͓̩̲̳̒̑̃ͩͥͨ̆̄̎ͯ̒͒ͥ̕!̢̘̖͚͖̩͚͕͔̗̮͎̙̲̥̒ͬͬ̊̔̔͛̏͑̉̋ͩ͒

The main protagonist is not smart. As such, the main protagonist does not make good decisions and that contributes to a bad reader experience. For instance, the main protagonist acts really clever in certain situations, but really dumb in other situations as though he was never clever.

Lots of inconsistency in main protagonists character

Interesting. A novel with the MC as an NPC but with the player privileges.
Also I find the game elements fun(interesting) to read.
World development is good, giving the race distinction but my view on elves has changed to see, a deeper view to elves not being just archers.

The plot seems good, characters seems all nicely written. Translation quality is good. Even though it's like all the other type of wuxia but this one still peeks my interest. It totally stands out among rest of the novels.

I love it very more there should be more of it updated
I love it very more there should be more of it updated
I love it very more there should be more of it updated

Haha! From now on, I don't need to go on the server, I can get the latest discussion here

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Its too much cliché.  Story has too many forced and unnecessary plot. As for characters its your mc who is thrash in is previous life but suddenly become courageous and challenging guys here and there. Overall iits ot my cup of tea.

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I was enjoying the book until chapter 45. Then the author took a weird turn by adding 'advanced' guns to the story. I get that time has passed and technology has advanced but dude you ruined the story by adding that.