Honestly love the novel so much, The progression especially the relations ships are slow and so far im legit coming back every day to check for a new chapter, hope the author comes back to update it because im IN LOVE!!!!!!!!
The story is great, but I am hoping that it would be more clear after revising it. I can't wait for the ML to appear though. I though have concerns on how a chapter could sometime contains a short update
Intense, deep, and mysteriously written.I've seen the effort of the writer to accomplish what the book trying to say. In fact, I've feel shame to call myself an author for taking quite long to found out how amazing this book is written.If you're a fan of Agatha Christie's mystery, go ahead and read this.If you're a fan of Young Detective Kindaichi, Conan, or Dan Detective School, you must read this.If you're a fan of mystery novel, an especially good one, READ THIS!!!
Content wise, I say three things; I LOVE IT! The plot is very interesting and has really caught my attention. I'm very curious as to how everything came as it is and I can't wait to know as the author drop more chapters in the future. I also like Jin, I love his calm demeanor and level-headedness, or at least that what I noticed about him so far. And no, it's not a spoiler.Grammar and structure wise, it does need a little touch up, but just a little. Seriously, it's something one can just ignore if they love the story, well that's what I did. But over all, the story is fantastic and I can't wait to read more of it! Keep it up Author-san!
This is the first novel that I have read from this site that I ever gave full marks for. The reason - ITS JUST DARN GOOD, from beginning to present, you can associate with or empathise with all the characters epecially the MC - Jake. Baseball is not played in my country and yet I am learning so much about the sport, which I originally find boring as I am not a fan of long sports -7-12 innings but I am somewhat appreciating. This is a genre I rarely read about in novel format, manga - yes, anime - now and then. This story has potential to go for the long haul as the starting age for our hero is 14 with the chance to grow with himself, the sport as well as with those around him in years to come. That's right - this story has "years" potential as long as the author keeps doing such amazing writing.For those who want to read a story that is just real and is not just about the sport but about life, its lessons and the people. THIS IS DEFINITELY THE NOVEL FOR YOU. Very good work author. Hope more people will continue to notice it.
changed my mind about this novel. the mc is not only a complete moron but is a bitch to a guy he know for only a day. the guy is the typical hero complex weakling and the mc is the one that have to wipe his ass from the troubles he can resolve. it's really frustrating to read and destroyed all my good feeling of the novel until he become friend w/o the someone even more dumb than him and much more weaker .
As of chapter 310. Writing quality is great. I think the dialogue is smooth flowing and realistic to the setting and period.Desctiptions are also niche, there's never too may unnecessary adjectives. I really love the story and there's lots of mysteries to be uncovered. The characters are easy to imagine and very diverse in appearance and personality. The powers are cool. I really like the main character. I think he's a really interesting one. I don't really know how to articulate my thoughts on him but yeah I like him and I am also fond of the supporting cast. All in all I think this is probably top 3 on the platform. ?
This is really captivating ... good job author
Next chapter???
update plzz
i hope to hear from you all ...️
Great story. How often is Daughters of the Moon Goddess updated?