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I really love reading the story for the author and translator vividly presented ideas and concepts that have enrich and enlighten my imagination into realities and unrealities in this world of skills and competition..... more stories like this KUDOS to author and translators
The life of this MC sounds kind of ideal to me. Not that poor of a financial situation, occasional interactions with kids, a RPG in real life, and the best of all, living as an otaku! =)Maybe it's just me, but what can I say, everyone has different preferences to live their way of life.
I really like this novel but the chapters are a bit short but I think it’s great ? *_*. O_0. ^_^ #_# ??️u200d♂️?️?️u200d♂️?️u200d♂️?️u200d♂️?️u200d♂️?️???️???️u200d♂️?️u200d♂️?????️u200d♂️???️u200d♂️????????????????????????????????????????☘️???????
1 Star Bc romance and polygamy is retarded so like yea. This is gonna be one of the trial read novels I won’t read, no harem at all and no romance ever.
This quite an interesting read.Now review proper,Writing Quality - There are a bit some g-errors but it didn't hinder me from reading the whole story much.Stability of updates- I see no problem here.Story Development- First it start-off with quite an interesting start from the grimmers. Then the intro of the main male lead is also just right. They're a bit, showing a glimpse of his past about his parents and make me really curious about this. There is also some mention of the academy, I wonder if there will be some magic or supernatural academy trope here? That would be more interesting in my opinion.Character Design: The description of the mc, from his thoughts, you could already quite capture what kind of person he is, and from the incoming chaps, I know this would develop better. As for the others character, they have already some district traits to differentiate each of them and will be remembered by the readers so keep up with this.World background: I could see that the author has already planned out everything for this, so I got no problems with this.Overall this is already a great read with lots of potentials!Keep it up, author!
This story is really good. I've read all available chapters in one night. I couldn't put the story down. The characters and the background setting are getting better with each chapter.Now I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for the next upload. Keep up the good work.
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i tried boys, i did, i tried so hard to keep reading but i just could not keep going. I am the type of person that can keep readying if there is really bad grammar, and even if there are allot of plot holes. But i cant stand when Authors give there MC's an op background and nerf them just to make the conflicts they have more interesting.In this case i hate the fact that The author says that the MC has an IQ of 260. And before he reincarnated he was 26 years old. So he should be really smart right? he shouldn't act like a child right? he should think things through before acting right? nope! he does none of that.He gets upset when his mom treats him like a kid, when he is one in his new world. You would think he would realize that his mom does not know he has the mind of a 26 year old( or should have, since there's times he acts like a kid)He adopts a kid and his sister who is sick on the spot for no reason at all and makes them his lil bro and big sis. He treats every one like there his best friend and they have known each other for years. Even though there is people that want him dead, and he knows that because he was poisoned by those people, so you would think he would be cautions of new people right? But hes not.Chapters also drag on and on, The author did mention that this novel was going to be like 2000 chapters i don't know why. Now i could understand if he was actually slowly building up the technology. So of course it would make sense to have allot of chapters. But most of the chapters are basically filler, because theirs like 10 chapters of his knights training. Nothing to do with building his city up, just lots of chapters of them doing training drills. Like the author could not give us a quick synopsis of what there training was?I know there are people that like it, and if the MC wasn't so dumb, when he should be crazy smart. Even with all the chapters that feel like filler, even with the bad grammar. I would probobly really enjoy this, But the more i read i keep thinking "he's so F**king stupid, why is he so F**king stupid". And I am just not enjoying reading it. You know a novel does not have your attention when you start to skip chapters.
