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It had very good story line and stable world building. Although there are some parts which are quite illogical but hey fantasy men throw away your logic and don’t torture yourself just enjoy it all I want to ask author is just why my cat girls and wolf girls and tiger girls were called orc? Is it because orc ancestors are pigs so you lump them together?
the story is very good and the plot is amazing, I really liked the personality of the protagonist and the heroines and how it's managing and adapting, the harem is amazing I really liked it, I recommend it a lot, don't go if to repent
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One of my firsts story with this author. I am sorry to say this but the updates has been very slow. Please update and thanks for all your hard work. ???????????????????????
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This novel is amazing there’s a balance between the sexual and normal content, the grammar has no problems, but the storyline needs improving, over all an brilliant story
So far so good. Nothing really to complain about. All very positive results. Not to fond on the MC being betrayed by his loved ones but that's just me personally. The idea is good and it's a good start to the novel. Looking forward to seeing what this novel will become. Hopefully not too much betrayal. Would be cool to see some guilty individuals who regret what they did instead of being the heartless twits that are so commonly seen on this platform. Other than that, I'd say it's a good start.
Im at first 3 chapters, MCs mood swings are epic and he really needs to fix those anger issues hr have. ? Anyway, lovin the choice of words just goes to show the author is good in this part. The introduction of the worlds background so far has improved compared to the last novel, at least its not as "packed up" as that one during the first chapters. Updates regularly which is haven for us readers. Also, author is very approachable and open for criticism. Sana all. (P.S. Very Handsome IRL) ? ?
I expected humor, but I got a power fantasy instead. MC keeps getting cool stuff by being completely oblivious to everything, while everyone in the chat praises the air he breathes. Very disappointing IMO.
this book is very good and very easy to understand, interesting storyline makes this book fun to follow, can't wait to continue reading this book
