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Rebecca already left before he can say it all, "That woman's a mess in everything she does." Said Seth with a disdainful look. While Seth was complaining by himself someone knocked on the door. Seth heard the knocking and he went on the door to see who it is, he opened the door and saw a cute little girl in front of him. The girl burst into anger and punch Seth that made him flew inside the front door to the kitchen and the dinning table. "Where did you take my aunt you evil creature!!!" said the little girl with a worried and angry face.
She cradled her tiny body in her arms and cried silently until she fell asleep. Maybe she can bargain with Stephen for one more day. She thought as she finally drifted off to a dreamless night.
Jun swiftly followed the black sedan, while maintaining a safe distance.
She didn't hold any special feelings towards the village which made her more comfortable if she left. Though there are a lot of people that truly cared and loved her, she just can't seem to feel anything about it, yet she appreciated their sincere actions towards her.
With one last tap, William finished what he was working on his computer. He looked at his overall work and felt satisfied. William felt his head aching, he massaged his temple trying to elevate the pain. After a couple of minutes resting his eyes and aching head. He looked at his phone. There were missed 5 calls and a ton of messages.
Feng Yanlei called for him, but she doesn't talk much after. Lu Yan sit besides her awkwardly. Once again thinking of how he is going to break the silence. After picking the lamest topic ever, he starts the conversation. Luckily for him, she was asleep when he starts to speak. Lu Yan just realized this soon after the regret hits him.
It was true that she wouldn't meet any harm with his presence.
the girl who took care of duike and stuff was called shana
but invisivisible dragon didn't get hit because invisivisible dragon
The storyline is so interesting ,I love the way it begins and the title of the book...I can't wait for more, I'm sure this is going to be fascinating
I've only just started writing, so I can't say too much at this point. But I will speak a bit about my experience with it thus far.At first, I set out to write an apocalypse novel, with a twist of course, but what I stumbled across in this story was more than just that. That's to say, if you come expecting the proper apocalypse novel formula, you will disappointed. It's something entirely different. For now, I will say this; it feels more like a journey with the characters and how they hope to survive this new mysterious world, than it being about their cool powers. I didn't mean to write it this way, but it is what was written.I am trying my best to reveal my world as naturally as possible. There is a lot of depth here, I feel that when I'm writing. But I cannot say more, for fear of overpromising.Perhaps I am just a pretentious newby author, who thinks they've written something 'different'. But, I invite you to have a taste... a full taste. It gets better the deeper in you go.I look forward to meeting all of you... my dear future readers.
It's a good first attempt by the author. It starts off a little slow and the narrative is focused on one thing only but I hope that will change in the coming chapters and we will get to see more characters. Honestly, I would recommend people to give it a try. It might have some potential. The story promises action and there isn't much of it in the first few chapters but I can picturize that the author is just setting a tone. I love the dynamic of the main characters I see so far and would love more interactions with the side characters. Worth a try if you are bored by the usual generic trope of leveling up with systems and OP main characters and isekai etc. I love the attempt at realism.
