Void_Erbus
Amazing Amazing Very Amazing CLap CLap Clap Right?
Right? Guys! Agree with me! Ezz Amazing isn't it? LEt those others Trash talk And lezz just give an amazing Review Right?
It's by the author we all know and love.
And I pretty much love the name Lin Fan at this point
Can this novel even go wrong? Is it possible?
If that actually happens , then rather than the belief that we GO to hell , it's more likely that we are already in one
So far it seems to be getting better, thanks
A very nice polished story. It is clean and clear in world setting and character design. The chapters are way short compared to other novels in Webnovel, but it makes it easy to cruse through the novel.
I hope the author will continue writing the novel and more readers take on this hidden gem.
Obligatory Author Review :3 please give my book a try, although it won’t progress quickly since I have an unnatural updating time. Maybe I’d update once a week, maybe once a month. Anyways school is annoying so please forgive me :3
This is a first-person storytelling which is interesting because most of the main character's thoughts are not hidden. I just feel like the main character will get many obstacles to achieve a 'carefree life'. My condolences. *Warning. Prepare for the test of your IQ to consume all of the info! *
Underwhelming 'First Impression', the story telling in this novel is comes off as somewhat immature, naive and forced.
The side characters are just props that rarely show 'true' human emotions, shallow and without depth. Lackluster flow of dramatization, and many confusing contradiction that's made by the author him/herself. And all of that's just from reading the first few chapters.
Well, it's true that people said the key of making a good image, is good "First Impressions". This novel failed to intrigue me, apparently.
Warning: cuteness overload! So cute and sexy it might overload your brain if your weak. Has the most amazing thing: incest. And the characters are amazingly cute and loveable. Amazing sex scenes and good plot too. Second warning: so addicting you won't be able to stop reading it once you start. You have been warned, don't complain if you dump your girlfriend because you'd rather be reading this and now your girl is just not cute or lovable enough.
So far this story it's going so good and interesting. Can't wait for the main leads to be together. I could envision every chapter in my head. Keep up the good work and upload another one soon.
Death is a very complicated subject and I love a good plot that surrounds it. The mystery and the thriller it gave me to read your novel was unmeasurable.. The story was built quite well too. Great work!!Keep it up :)
As of chapter 52: (haven't read the chapters after)I really like the story so far. The pros are that there is character development. Spoiler:I like his relationship with his sister and i think that the split personality makes sense as it is not east for a person to change drastically however, i feel that its introduction is quite abrupt. Like there was no transition. It was just *pop* and there it is. Otherwise it's great and i like his ruthlessness
After years of study on literature and novels in general, I have finally had a revelation. Cultivation novels are retard magnets that try to forcefully make the reader feel smarter. I have read so many comments, in cultivation novels specifically, that make me want to bash my head into a wall that I can no longer not say this.Wait a minuteWhat if I'm mistaken? You see, most cultivation novels have a certain tag next to it: Harem. That's it! Harem novels are the true retard magnets! That's why ever fanfic harem novel I've ever read has made me want to puke my guts out! I can see clearly now!
