i really love Pursuing Immortality its exciting and there are some novel ideas i think the whole real world gets a update/overhaul type of story give that what if it happened to you kind of feeling that makes you tingle inside it just makes everything better when the plot and characters are well developed and perfection is a flaw in and of itself but getting close is obviously the best possible situation which i think Pursuing Immortality has achieved in spectacular way good job my only wish for this work as a fan is more chapter releases and faster chapter releases
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Score:7.5/10I wont lie, I used to love this book. But now I just feel sad by seeing the way it ended. Everything before the first flag war was almost perfect. The story had a very good beginning, with a nice hook. Even though the mc had an op ability, it was still balanced by the restrictions early on. The story was well written with the kingdom building aspect serving as a good slice of life setting. The small academy arc was intresting, as it served as a reminder to show the mc was not the strongest. It also allowed mc to make new allies and understand the structure and politics associated to high society. There were always mysteries left for future like the ruins.But then everything changed when the story when Micheal won the Flag tournament. The story just got overblown and the story accelerated too fast. All of a sudden mc became too strong, the kingdom building became less relevant, most of the side characters became too weak to be relavent to the plot. Even promised rivalries and villains got forgotten. Example: Quinn and the Zeus kid. At some point the story just became a civilization destroyer fantasy. There was almost no challenge in the story. Even the new hot topic ‘Nest’ became a second thought to the pantheon of God’s. We never even got proper finale of the relationship between Michael and their parents. Even ability extraction became boring.I don’t know why the Author was in such a hurry to end book. Cause the ending we got was just so anti climactic. Additionally, one of the weakest aspects of this book were creating side characters with deep personalities and Romance.There were very few memorable characters in this story, Danny was by far the most developed and followed by Caleb Zenovia. Maybe Fredrick was ok but in general not enough time was spent on them. As for the romance, it was so bad that it would have been better if there was none. It felt so lazy that I felt the author just didn’t event want to bother with it. At the end I just felt bitter abt the story.Again it’s a good book hands down but I really felt the author didn’t didn’t do ‘Justice’ to the story. It could have been so much more.
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The author is owing me 70% shares of his resturant xD and my review of the author is demented however his novel is so good well the writing quality better than most new novel awesome man.
Give this one a four star review! Having read it before, I can never stop wondering WHAT happens NEXT!!shame the last update was right before the coronavirus outbreak. hope nothing happened. ?
A promising novel with great potential. The MC is an undead who has the power of necromancy and needs to bring the end of the world in 3 worlds. He needs to kill 99% of humanity or every human in these 3 worlds, then, the gods will “restart” those worlds. When the MC accomplish that, he will become the “god of death” (or “god of the undead”).P S: In the synopsis says that a group of people killed the MC, but in truth, was just one person, the sister of someone who the people says that the MC killed, but he’s innocent and just he knows that.
I've actually read the whole story and this has the big thumbs up from me. MC is a loner for the most part, there's no romance at all so people don't have to worry about harem. He's not power hungry and doesn't turn into a monster.First ten chapters don't really do it justice, once I got started I read all 1300+ chapters in under two weeks.
EVIL MC readers assemble, we have a case of romance. You know what to do
I'll admit I judged this book by its cover !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Thos novel is pretty nice, the Character Development is solid. The obly problem is thst its getting kinda boring. Humiliated Breakthrough FaceslapIts a Endless circle, with no interesting plot.What is even more sad is that the Mc just learns new technics but doesnt do anything on his own, the plot armor is so strong that even a chicken could be the emporer. Dont want to be mean but thats it