Bishou: Huh, I expected for the Fenrir to attack us.
"I will tell you again, If I am going then I am going. If people want to kill me, then they should be ready to die too, I am not scared of death."
You are getting 5 stars. That’s all I have to say.
It's a great story; I think the plot is so exhilarating!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait to see more—10 daily updates, please. I just can't stop reading this.
The story so far is great the only thing that is upsetting is that there aren’t more chapters then there allready are. I really enjoy the story and How it is written so far. I hope The author keeps updating it. also its nice to see a story with league of legends in it as there are Way fewer storys with it than one would expect. So to sum this up keep up the good work.
The plot is very interesting. You really write well and scenes are well written as well. I'll be happy to learn from you, too. I so admire this novel of yours. Quite a plot you got there. Really looking forward to more chapters. ❤❤❤
This novel is made to measure for me, I will read it when I have more chapters, I hope it is good, since I have many expectations...140 characters? really? ok
Give it a shot, the book is really well written and has a fluid story.One morning I started reading it and read everything that was available at the time.World seems really well thought and characters have really good interactions between themselves, nothing seems forced and it really leaves you wanting MOAAAAAAAAAAAAAR.
If people could look past the grammatical errors, you'd enjoy the concept. Authors are human too! And FYI writing is hard, especially with an audience. Lighten up, because this is a diamond in the rough!
Just found an interesting novel.The action was top notch right from the very beginning.And the plot is quite a suspense because the story was kinda getting Kai as a good mage but now he was betrayed by Arwen I guess there will be a turn around, but my question is, if he goes against the magesterium, what about the people that cared for him?....More update from the author pls.
Storys pretty awesome and interesting....suggestion: dont make this a cliche type BS story where MC starts building his own faction..make him like a unique loner type MC..with him only turning his lovers into vampires....maybe add world travel and if you are doing romance dont make it stupid and slutty but a proper romantic development...and if harem max 3-5....also an OP MC ..keep him like that like i mean just physically you can see that this can easily kill every character in HP.... Anyway these are just suggestions..you do you..good luck and good show.
Hi, I'm a huge fan of your work! I recently finished reading your book and was thoroughly impressed. I'd love to offer some suggestions on how to further boost your book's success and reach an even wider audience. Would you be open to hearing my ideas?