Shameless author here giving myself 5 stars (Lets be honest, who would give themselves less than 5 stars unless idk)Anyways, here's my analysis of my very first novel;Grammar, punctuation, and use of clever language I would say is my forte. (Please do point out any mistakes if you see then though)I would say the first 60 chapters or so could have been better and used a bit more polishing. However this is my first novel (Please don't kill me)Also, I'm dumb, so leave more reviews cuz I read all of them. (I do wish to improve my writing skills)
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Best trial read for this week. There are no obvious flaws that I can pick out in this novel. Although the idea is nothing new the execution is pretty good. No obvious plot holes, the MC is not brain dead or arrogant. The story progression is fine aswell. All for all I’d say while it’s no where close to being the best novel I’ve read, it’s a decent read to pass time.
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i hope this one gets picked ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
This seems to be by the same author of the one about the dragon girlfriend and millenium seclusion plus Kunlun.
As a person who's been reading before the level thing was introduced and a bit before that. This novel seems actually decent which is rare for this app/webnovel. it aint a 5 in my book but it has potential to be a lightnovel where you can just keep in your bookmark list.
the story was overall good, this was my second time reading this book
It reminds me of a certain novel that reached the top of webnovel and that excites me, I hope I don't let it fall. If I can make a request please that the mc adopted the style of the mc of that novel.( I know you know what it is).?
.The Author is back with another work again! First of all, I would like to commend the interesting character introductions. It's impressive and easy to understand. The quality of the chapters does not disappoint but rather it will make you want to read more. Even though it has only 10 chapters, I can definitely say that this novel has potential. So what are you waiting for? Go and give it a try!
what click bait novel the name of the novel in reality would be an "all mighty bla bla scanning system" but since this troupe has been very much overused he changed the name to attract readers this just same as all other such novels similar plot lines etc just one of female lead dress as manwhat let down it would have been much better if the focus of the novel was the title of the novel p s it would have been a way better novel if there was no system involved
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