I like the story and it's amazing, the character development and overall environment is very commendable of how development regarding Aster and all other people regarding him family, or friend are presented perfectly and I am still reading this Novel and still will read until it's ending. Overall is Good But story pace is slow which can be acceptable and releasing of new chapters is a little bit off balance .I just want to say that "'Author"' you can release more chapters maybe 7,8 per week like Your other creation " Reincarnated with Van Helsing System "or if possible may be more chapters in both or constant upload .???????????????I REQUEST YOU FROM MY HEART ❤️ TO NOT DROP OR PUT ON BREAK ANY OF YOUR NOVEL AND KEEP GOING.????????????????????????I HOPE YOU FOR GOOD HEALTH AND WEALTH TO KEEP WRITING FOR FANS LIKE ME FOR READING NOVEL LIKE THESE " RISE OF THE PERVERT PRIMORDIAL" AND " REINCARNATED WITH THE HAN VELSING SYSTEM ".
This is lit! I can't explain how good the first three chapters are, but don't worry, I'll update you guys as I keep on reading
I absolutely cannot hold the temptation to give this book a 5 star review. Without seeing this book everyday makes me feel theres ants crawling inside my body and eating my organs. This book makes me go crazy. If this book was a real person, I would simp hard on it.
Leo: what is going on? Why can't I control my own thoughts? its like i am not in control of my own mind.
"A thoughtful and engaging narrative that explores complex themes."
Good novel so far. Red has 2 other great novels and this is looking like it will be the third. The concept is slightly different to the other two but the setting is nicely done and has room to be great.
The descriptions and metaphors here were so damn good! It was explained so well I loved reading it. The romance element is very intriguing and will keep people hooked! Interesting plot too! Good work Author!
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great book, it has a wonderful storyThe plot of having a vampire in a sci world is brilliant. wondering what else can this book show us, where can it take us!The character building and the writing plot are easy flowing.keep it up, author
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it's good to see indian authors nowadays writing amazing Stories keep it up bro and don't ever to drop the story.the story is amazing and unique really like to follow the whole story.and yeah please make a discord server for it it will be fun.