Ahhhh, is this how the original novel is or did the translation make it worse. The MC is stupid, the novel has so many question yet to be answer, and this novel is rush. They didn’t explain the MC action and didn’t explain about the world. For example, the MC evolved to a Yellow grade flame and the author still didn’t explain the difference between yellow and black grade, they just say yellow grade and expect you to go along with it.
Hmm...???When I first started reading this it intrigue me, from then on started voting for the story. Storytelling hasn't failed me yet so I keep on voting until the ends or the author stops writing hmm...???
Hmm well by the looks of this it seems quite good, hope this one gets picked...........................................dcxcggdffvfggdvgvcgvf
The title is a little misleading....i read with the expectation of something along the lines of a litrpg and discovered an apocalyptic cultivation novel .... not to say that this book isnt good it actually is surprisingly well written..overall definitely worth giving a shot
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I like it, most the way the rudeness of the characters and so on, and the part of being pervert is so comedy, keep writing thanks for your hard working..
The Star Wars Universe has a great potential for fanfics.I think this novel is really great at the moment except for a few inconsistencies that can be ignored and would recommend it to others.
after chapter 60 the translation got worst .after chapter 60 the translation got worst .after chapter 60 the translation got worst .after chapter 60 the translation got worst .after chapter 60 the translation got worst .after chapter 60 the translation got worst .
overall good but missing some chaps leaving us confused at what happened during one chap and the next showing the aftermath but never the inside
I normally don't do reviews, because I am an author as well and it takes too much time to even considered but my God, this piece of work can only describe as a masterpiece it is slow paste but it is done beautifully the mystery in it is also amazing in my opinion the world-building is superb, overall this is a good book that will make you question a lot of things, honestly, it is worth my time can't wait for more.
One of the best cultivation novels I ever read. Bai Xiaochun had me laughing so much and at the same time crying my eyes out, it's truly one of the best cultivation Novel out there.
Vary perfectly Novel