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"Yes." He answered her question before she even said it. "Yes, I'm leaving."
It is such a great story. It is like bringing a farm to another world but more focused on capturing animals and things to upgrade the world which I love. Keep up good work
Excellent work and a very interesting book. The story line is excellent and perfect development with suspense. The only problem is the release rate which is slow. Some people tend to read fast and don't like to wait for long.
here for the event....The story is good and the pacing is also good. The grammar is alright. on the side note: I think you posted 2 versions of the 2nd chapter.
I am really loving this story. Rowan is a very relatable character, and i like the unique fantasy world. It feels like the author put a lot of thought into the world building. The banter between the ML and MC is top notch. Author has a talent for dialogue.
It is go0d so far...the characters are good but Arthur's behaviour has been a bit disappointing, Well I can't expect everyone to be a good at being a villain but He should at least try to kill the MC as soon as possible!!
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The use of first POV made the MC's struggles more relatable to the readers. The world building is done well, and the vivid descriptions made it very thrilling and heart pounding to read. Kudos for updating this very often, too. Keep it up and good luck in the contest! ^^
A great read, captured my attention from the first chapter and i just couldn’t stop reading This is a wonderful novel that i would recommend to anyone I love the concept of the novel
Easily a 5 star story in my opinion and I love the way it’s going so far and can’t wait for another update. (Now ignore this because it has to be 140 characters)
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