Another garbage.Another garbage.Another garbage.
Did Webnovel really write a novel, about someone writing web novels, for a fantasy Webnovel? This shamelessness goes beyond the mortal realm and touches upon the divine.
Very Refreshing reed, gave me a few chuckles, looking forward to later plot development.
I already read 20+ chapter so far I really enjoy this novel thank you author please upload more chapters in the future..
Website : qidian chinaRating : 8.3(35)Chapters : 2094Status : ongoingRank : ?Word count : 5.25millionauthor level : ?No of works : 1Started : 2018-3-05Chinese title : 地狱男人How does this novel only has 35 rating even though there are already 2000 chapters out?
nunca tive tanta raiva numa novel quanto essa até que tinha um plano de fundo legal mas o autor fez um MC muito bosta a tradução péssima ?
It's so wrong of you to have a novel that could be so much better held back by grammar issues. The story is there, the character is there, but the last of the big three THE GRAMMAR is no where to be found. I can get past the dialogue issue, but you just can't throw commas at a run-on and expect that to solve it. It has gotten to the point that I'm wondering if you read over what you write. At one point in the Novel you even call the MC a young woman (specifically ch.35). I've tried pretty hard to read this novel, but the mistakes are too glaring to let slide. Even when I skimmed through I was noticing mistakes. Without an editor I feel I'm being pretty lenient giving it this score. If you are serious about this novel you should really consider working with someone to fix the mistakes.
Love it!Maybe fail my exams because I binched all 500 chapters, but it was worth it haha! Waited a long time for a novel like this. It is probably my 30th novel or so but defi nitely under my top 5 till now. To the review:The evolution system and world building is in my opinion great, because it gives you a more „realistic“ feeling. The worldbuilding gives me almost a little „The great mechanic“ vibes and this was in my opinion the 2nd best cultivation novel of all time so far (just behind reverend insanity). The pace and translation is great as well! Here really shines the authors experience. I whould expect the story will also have between 1200-1500 chapters like some of his other books.Character design:Pretty good so far. At this point (ch500) the MC makes reasonable decisions and is also pretty likeable. It is definitely an OP MC storyline so far, but hey that’s ok. He is loyal to his points of view and on the forefront on earth civilisation. The side characters are also good designed and most of them have their reasonable amount of attention. The „villains“ if you can count them as one (the only two young masters) also act in within their reason and do not go the road of airheads and self destruction. Maybe a little bit to less character growth because every character is in a way designed that there is not many room for that. There are a few hidden plot twists here and there so I don’t really mind that.Storyline:So far so great!I really like the concept of the virtual world, because this is also the future we are heading in reality(except the evolution of course :,D). It is also a good balance between reality and VR. The only thing I would criticise is: There are really to few setbacks so far. I mean fgs they are in VR the only thing you lose if you die there is time and a little bit of money. Let the MC experience some of his flaws and let him grow in some way. As it is now he is relatively smoothsailing to the endboss which is probably some Alien? I mean he is dedicated and hardworking but that alone is to little for me. I want to be a little bit more shocked here and there. I understand the author has probably planned the whole story throughout and is in my opinion a bit „too professional“. The story does really not take you through a emotional rollercoaster. But it is good enough for me and probably better than 99.9% Resume:Great worldbuilding, Love the cosmic theme, good VR and reality balance, OP MC, decent storyline, a little to smoothsailing and little space for character development
Overall a good start for what could be a great novel though I am taking 1 star away for that bogus intro chapter that they titled chapter 1 so we only got 39 chapters which is disappointing
It's been three months since I've started writing this novel, so now I can tell you more things in this review with greater certainty.Right off the bat, I'm sure you'll notice that this novel's MC is in a similar setting as the one from TLM, being an NPC in a game world. However, that's where the similarities end.I won't tell you much about the entire story, but I can assure you that you won't be disappointed once you pick it up, especially now that I've gotten feedback from you readers, allowing me to polish this story to the next level.To those who are about to start reading the novel, and to those who have stuck with me since the beginning, we're all in for a wild ride. I hope all of you stick with me till the end.
it became really bad in the latest chapters like a chapter from 700+ where the chapter can be easily summarizes to few sentences but the chapter is filled with hundreds of words just to describe it and the story becomes so slow where an arx that can be completed in 5 chapters became 10 because of really long filler words
A great story in the first 100 chapters, boring in the next 200 chapters, unbearable from chapter 400. No perspective and depth, repetitive and monotonous development... it all boils down to ... slap in the face... slap in the face... repeated jokes...