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I think it's going good for a start..Keep up the work and I can't wait to see the animation progress.I think the write up is going somewhere
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“There is only one person who could have done this!” “It’s was you who stole the lollipop from the loli!”“You’re the culprit!”“Isn’t that right Bob the Builder”
Not many sport story can hook me. So congrats. Not only that, i never saw a basketball story so it is a plus. However, the writing quality suck, but its ok since it is yours first time so i cant go hard on you. story development is ok but still can be improve and i cant say anything about world background since u use real earth as the background. All in all, for a first story by new writer, u have good idea for the story and this make up with ur poor writing. i wish you luck.
It's a decent read, but I got pulled out of the story a lot by the world, supposed to be a military school but there is zero discipline and pretty much the entire story plays out like "Lord of the Flys" with older kids/stronger kids deciding on the rules and punishments. All this is justified by this apparently making the weak kids want to get stronger so they sell themselves to the military to get resources, which in this world the global military that is fighting an technologically superior race, thinks that's how their going to win by holding power and privilege to a few people instead of you know, what a military actually values like discipline and team work. So anyway I quit at chapter 50, but if your looking for "slowish build vampire Lord of the flies high school". **. It's really not that bad, just fell short in a few too many places for me to continue.
Great job author. Looking forward to read more.
I love the story line and the introduction of the book
Loved this book so much. a couple spelling errors however the story line was awesome.
great book!!! love love love it!
I wish the chapters didn’t cost so much!
I struggled to stop reading it for a second!